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Charley
Over 90 days ago
Male, 41
United Kingdom

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And, as they approach the last, it's .... all gone dark out there. When we left the action, it was LushPrincess storming away from Gailxxx in 2nd, with Reeb holding off Charley for 3rd. Further back, it was Katalyst, the fast charging Trinity, Katie1984, Cougartalk, Vampchick and Rileysmiley, all jockeying for position. It looks like we're going to have to wait for the official verdict to come in, folks.
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The other memory I remember really strongly because it really surprised me, was the first time i felt cum on me. He had to pull out onto my stomach because we had no contraception (stupid I know) and i remember being so surprised at how warm it was.....


That reminds me. A few years back, I was dating a 17 year old. We'd driven out into the country and got in the back seat of my car to play around a bit. It was then that she first told me that she was a virgin and that she'd never really had any sexual experience. After a while I guided her hand onto my erect penis, and showed her how to caress it. I then asked if she would give me a blowjob, to which she replied that she didn't know how. She also said that she didn't like the thought of swallowing semen, so I told that if she didn't like it, she could always split it into a tissue. Eventually, she dropped her head and began to suck on me, until I released several squirts into her mouth.

Given the "ummm" noises and gagging sounds she was making, I was really surprised that she held on until I'd finished, before she jumped back in the seat and began frantically looking for the tissue she'd had in her hand only a couple of minutes earlier. Her mouth was tightly closed, but the pained expression on her face told me that she was about to spit my semen everywhere. I lent across her and opened the door, but not before she'd spat a load over the back of my car seats.

What really made me laugh was what she said afterwards: "I can't believe how hot it tastes, like a cup of tea."
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You've given me an idea...each month all those stories that members have added to their favourite lists get tallied up and put into a "Member's Selection Top 10" on the front of the site. Something along those lines.

Good idea?


Careful Nic, it sounds like competition. You know how obsessive some people get about that kind of thing. Just glad that I'm not the competitive type myself.

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For the sake of decency, I can't answer this, because in my early teens I was taking 'playing doctor' very seriously.
All my stories form a complete set, which trace the sexual awakening and development of an innocent. I've an interest in psychology, with a particular fascination for the mechanisms by which fetishes and sexual preferences become established. As of right now, I already have the outline of my next six stories formed - I know exactly where I'll be going with them. So that's the broad basis for my stories.

For specific stories, I take from experience and from reading authors such as Nin, Miller and Reage. Plus, of course, there's a wealth of great material here on Lush to inspire you. Key to a good story, I think, is character development and plausibility. After all, there are only a finite number of sexual acts to be describe (and most are decribed in a similar fashion), so it's the characters and situations that make the difference.

Recently, I've even been finding inspiration in song lyrics.

My advice is: Read lots, imagine lots, and write what excites you.
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Why do they do that?


The Grand National is a steeplechase, incorporating several very high jumps, and ditches. Each year many horses fall and brake their legs. Unfortunately, a race horse in such a state is often considered useless to owners, hence they are destroyed. It's all rather sickening.


Horses are put down humanely, and those racing horses live a pretty high life, I would know.
And some of my best showjumping horses have been ex-racing horses... Horse Racing is definitely not inhumane, they have incredibly tight standards... well those who compete internationally.


I'm sure the horse is very pleased to be destroyed humanely!!! I've no doubt that the process is as 'humane' as possible, but my point is that the Grand National has horses jumping particularly high fences, which everyone knows will result in broken legs, all in the name of entertainment. I'm not, in point of fact, saying that all racing or showjumping is bad. I'm an equestrian, so I do not have an issue with it per se.

By the way, I lead a "pretty high life" myself, but I wouldn't expect to be put down if I broke a leg.
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Why do they do that?


The Grand National is a steeplechase, incorporating several very high jumps, and ditches. Each year many horses fall and brake their legs. Unfortunately, a race horse in such a state is often considered useless to owners, hence they are destroyed. It's all rather sickening.
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Your methods worked though Charley, I see you're up to #4 now.

I agree on the horse racing, the amount of horses that have to be put down after races like the Grand National makes baby jeebus cry


I agree, it's a cruel race. Won't watch it myself.
They're all mine, so don't go posting pics of them on a website.
No, Nicola, I'm not a racing announcer ... and to be quite honest, I loathe horse racing. Cheers, Cx
"If you can keep your head when all around you have lost theirs, then you probably haven't understood the seriousness of the situation." - Ricky Gervais.
And, as they approach the 3rd from last, it's still LushPrincess way out in front, ahead of Gailxxx by 9 lengths, as Reeb continues to hold off Charley for 3rd. Tiring a little, Katalyst has dropped to 5th, just ahead of the fast charging Trinity, with Katie1984 still not far behind. It's Cougartalk, now in 8th, ahead of Vampchick and Rileysmiley, who are neck and neck.

An upset is unlikely at the front, but places are still up for grabs further down the field.

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Hi Cat, It's a difficult one, because a good edit can make all the difference to how well a story reads. But there's the point, "a good edit." If he/she is changing the sense and meaning of your stories, then I'd say that that's not good editing. All an editor should be doing is tidying up the style of your writing, not reworking the content. I know this because I edit material myself, and I know that it's a fine line between ruining someone's work and improving it. Only you can make the judgement as to whether your work has been improved by an edit. Cx
And of course, Eric Idle's wonderful, "Always look on the bright side of life"

"He's not the Messiah, he's a very naughty boy." Monty Python's Life of Brian.