when talking about my characters in my story can I just stick with main character or how would i go about introducing other characters to the story?.I set up a cabin scene in part one of a story I did,but just foucsed on her and her fiancee and problems there going throught,but there's another character that is the other woman of one of the characters say mistress,can i switch between characters? like do alittle bit of one character and then bring in the other? i wanna show what i got in my story so far but i don;t know if I'm aloud to post part if it here.one more question can i put swear words in my story too,not alot but some? I'll just show a small preview if some of you have read the first part of my story, Moonlight romance you'd get the idea of where im comming from. plz dont flip out or anything im still testing the waters to writing stories.
With her face in her hands lucy sulked and cried realising her fiancee Sarah has been
Unfaithful to her for last 3 months,she said to herself Even tho the sex was amazing last night
I still have no idea If It is true about Sarah and person I am thinking about for her sake She
better not be cause if I find out that it is true not only will I break of the engagment I will
tell the secret I have known for four years about this certain person.
Lucy stood up from her chair and began to pick herself up,Still wearing her short red booty shorts
blue tank top,no bra her hair up she started to clean up around the cabin,Still her fiancee
being unfaithful still weighing heavily on her mind about who she is cheating on her with?
she spoke uncertainly." I can't say for sure If it is her but there is only one person
in the world that I know that would wear that type of perfume, I don't want it to be true
but in the back of my mind womans intuation is speaking high volumes that It has to be my sister Jamie.
this is what i mean I introduced lucy and her fiancee,but now i wanna bring Jamie into the mix but I don't know how to go about it.
should i wait abit,till she finds out if it is the sister or switch characters and bring Jamies side of the story..