Anyone need help?

19 May 2018

Hi,

I've just about completed my first erotic story (actually my first published piece full stop) and I'd be really glad if someone took a look over mine. I'm pretty happy with it but as it's my first venture into erotic writing I'd appreciate it ;) Thanks.

19 May 2018

Quote by Starlust
Hi,

I've just about completed my first erotic story (actually my first published piece full stop) and I'd be really glad if someone took a look over mine. I'm pretty happy with it but as it's my first venture into erotic writing I'd appreciate it ;) Thanks.

Your story has not published yet. If you just sent it in, the mods will look it over and suggest minor changes for editing purposes. If they reject it and you don't understand why, you can PM and I will help. Be patient. It takes time to get a story right.

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

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