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Control by BNW

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I am very pleased to be able to gift BNW with an EP for his excellent story - Control. A new writer here with some very wonderfully written stories. This one is a standout. He claims to be a novice at writing BDSM tales, and yet this is an excellently crafted story that delves into not just the physical aspects of bdsm, but the mental and emotional as well, as Jake learns more about giving up control to his Mistress. you can find it here:

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/bdsm/control-8

So yeah, congratulation, BNW. Well done. smile

Control

Jake learns lessons in control

BDSM

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

Thank you SO much, sprite. I do really appreciate the recognition.

Very well done to you smile

As I've told you before, I despise orgasm denial. When I read this type of story, half of my brain is usually screaming 'just fucking let go!' but not here. It was intense, but masterfully controlled (pardon the pun). I wanted them to hold. That's a first and I genuinely enjoyed it.

Thank you, and congrats!

Curiosity is one of those insatiable passions that grow by gratification.

Loved this one! Congratulations, BNW! worship

Excellent story. The way you ratchet up the heat and sexual tension in this is masterful. And your portrayal of the power dynamics is nuanced and fascinating. Congrats!

Tintinnabulation - first place (Free Spirit)
Comet Q - second place (Quick and Risqué Sex)
Amnesia - third place (Le Noir Erotique)

I read this shortly after it was published and agree it's a fantastic piece of writing. A well-deserved award indeed.

It also spurred me into publish a piece at the end of last year that had been rattling around my head for ages. So thank you doubly, for this wonderful example of BDSM and denial, and the kickstart to penning my own.

Please browse my digital bookshelf. In this collection, you can find 117 full stories, 10 micro-stories, and 3 poems with the following features:


* 30 Editor's Picks, 75 Recommended Reads.
* 16 competition podium places, 11 other times in the top ten.
* 22 collaborations.
* A whole heap of often filthy, tense, hot sex.

Cruising through the forums and thought I'd add my admiration for your writing, and congratulations - well-deserved - on the win with "Control"