… Darling

11 Nov 2009

Please keep in mind that I’m not a poet, this is just something that I felt and tried to put it down on paper as a poem!

… Darling

You’re like a butterfly,
You fly carelessly,
Easy, and light,
Treacherous of who provokes you.

My beautiful butterfly,
Never again will my guard be down.
Keep going from flower to flower,
One day you’ll fly close to the sun… and…
You’ll feel that pain you’ve caused.

Oh, woman how you’ve hurt me,
The minutes pass as if they were years,
This jealousy is killing me…

My beautiful butterfly,
How easy you are,
Open your wings and let me touch.
Your colorful thighs,
Your intoxicating scent…

NO! I can’t go back – I won’t come back!

Author’s Note: No, this is not supposed to rhyme.

11 Nov 2009

Very nice! And i hate poetry!

11 Nov 2009

You're just saying that to get in my pants... Whistle

12 Nov 2009

Well who wouldn't say something nice to get in your pants. 2) I am a poet and poetry doesn't have to rhyme. I like it though lots of emotion in the poem and thats how it should be. nice job

12 Nov 2009

Aww thanks Chauncey you're a sweetie..

12 Nov 2009

i would say a lot more if that was the truth! bootyshake

12 Nov 2009

Very nice M flower

12 Nov 2009

Thanks Nic icon_smile

12 Nov 2009

Keep trying Chelle - you might get lucky! love10

12 Nov 2009

Great poem! Clearly shows your talent as a writer icon_smile

12 Nov 2009

I read it.
I like it.
I don't like it...
I like it.
I...
I mean I like it but it's hard to admitt... I do not like butterflies...

12 Nov 2009

Oh don't worry I am!

12 Nov 2009

I hate to admit to it, but this poem is like the next to the last g,f. I had.

12 Nov 2009

Quote by reader23
Great poem! Clearly shows your talent as a writer

Thanks reader! flower

12 Nov 2009

Quote by Catnip
I read it.
I like it.
I don't like it...
I like it.
I...
I mean I like it but it's hard to admitt... I do not like butterflies...

You .. don't .. like .. butterflies..?

12 Nov 2009

Quote by ChelleLaBelle
Oh don't worry I am!

silly goose - love you! sunny

12 Nov 2009

Quote by shameless009
I hate to admit to it, but this poem is like the next to the last g,f. I had.

Ugh yeah - bet she was good at convincing you to stay though..

12 Nov 2009

Lovely expression of your emotions

12 Nov 2009

Thanks Shyone! flower

13 Nov 2009

Quote by LushPrincess
Quote by ChelleLaBelle
Oh don't worry I am!

silly goose - love you!

Love you too!

13 Nov 2009

Quote by LushPrincess
Quote by ChelleLaBelle
Oh don't worry I am!

silly goose - love you!

Love you too!

14 Nov 2009

Quote by LushPrincess
Please keep in mind that I’m not a poet, this is just something that I felt and tried to put it down on paper as a poem!

… Darling

You’re like a butterfly,
You fly carelessly,
Easy, and light,
Treacherous of who provokes you.

My beautiful butterfly,
Never again will my guard be down.
Keep going from flower to flower,
One day you’ll fly close to the sun… and…
You’ll feel that pain you’ve caused.

Oh, woman how you’ve hurt me,
The minutes pass as if they were years,
This jealousy is killing me…

My beautiful butterfly,
How easy you are,
Open your wings and let me touch.
Your colorful thighs,
Your intoxicating scent…

NO! I can’t go back – I won’t come back!

Author’s Note: No, this is not supposed to rhyme.

Ohhhhh, This is such a lush poem, I think having the image of the butterfly makes it eve better. I can understand the pain in the poem. Really written very well. I'd score you a five.

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