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LushPrincess
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Please keep in mind that I’m not a poet, this is just something that I felt and tried to put it down on paper as a poem!

… Darling

You’re like a butterfly,
You fly carelessly,
Easy, and light,
Treacherous of who provokes you.

My beautiful butterfly,
Never again will my guard be down.
Keep going from flower to flower,
One day you’ll fly close to the sun… and…
You’ll feel that pain you’ve caused.

Oh, woman how you’ve hurt me,
The minutes pass as if they were years,
This jealousy is killing me…

My beautiful butterfly,
How easy you are,
Open your wings and let me touch.
Your colorful thighs,
Your intoxicating scent…

NO! I can’t go back – I won’t come back!




Author’s Note: No, this is not supposed to rhyme.
ChelleLaBelle
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Very nice! And i hate poetry!
LushPrincess
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You're just saying that to get in my pants...
Chauncey
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Well who wouldn't say something nice to get in your pants. 2) I am a poet and poetry doesn't have to rhyme. I like it though lots of emotion in the poem and thats how it should be. nice job
LushPrincess
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Aww thanks Chauncey you're a sweetie..
ChelleLaBelle
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i would say a lot more if that was the truth!
nicola
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Very nice M
LushPrincess
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Keep trying Chelle - you might get lucky!
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Great poem! Clearly shows your talent as a writer
Catnip
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I read it.
I like it.
I don't like it...
I like it.
I...
I mean I like it but it's hard to admitt... I do not like butterflies...
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I hate to admit to it, but this poem is like the next to the last g,f. I had.
LushPrincess
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Great poem! Clearly shows your talent as a writer


Thanks reader!
LushPrincess
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I read it.
I like it.
I don't like it...
I like it.
I...
I mean I like it but it's hard to admitt... I do not like butterflies...



You .. don't .. like .. butterflies..?
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Oh don't worry I am!


silly goose - love you!
LushPrincess
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I hate to admit to it, but this poem is like the next to the last g,f. I had.


Ugh yeah - bet she was good at convincing you to stay though..
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Lovely expression of your emotions
ChelleLaBelle
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Quote by ChelleLaBelle
Oh don't worry I am!


silly goose - love you!


Love you too!
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Oh don't worry I am!


silly goose - love you!


Love you too!
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Please keep in mind that I’m not a poet, this is just something that I felt and tried to put it down on paper as a poem!

… Darling

You’re like a butterfly,
You fly carelessly,
Easy, and light,
Treacherous of who provokes you.

My beautiful butterfly,
Never again will my guard be down.
Keep going from flower to flower,
One day you’ll fly close to the sun… and…
You’ll feel that pain you’ve caused.

Oh, woman how you’ve hurt me,
The minutes pass as if they were years,
This jealousy is killing me…

My beautiful butterfly,
How easy you are,
Open your wings and let me touch.
Your colorful thighs,
Your intoxicating scent…

NO! I can’t go back – I won’t come back!




Author’s Note: No, this is not supposed to rhyme.





Ohhhhh, This is such a lush poem, I think having the image of the butterfly makes it eve better. I can understand the pain in the poem. Really written very well. I'd score you a five.