Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
I've written enough stories now to see that my signature is the open ending, there are always unanswered questions and just a hint that a sequel might be made.
Whatever was posted is always meant in love and respect never to offend.
I'm also highly likely to have posted this from a phone so there may be typos or odd word changes, auto correct can be a pain.
I've been listening to my kinky pencil here's my current work
Smell, taste, texture... of everything. I cannot use clothes on a character without describing them, Jesus, I am a secret fashionista. I've spent more time looking up women's 1990s fashion than I care for. I admit I never knew what the word 'Mondrian' meant.
Also, their body language, the non-verbal hints they give, and gestures. People are incredibly astute, we are deep programmed to fuck. I've looked up many translations of body language to use the right cues in my stories. Christ, that's made real life very interesting...
Also, not everyone is a raging bucket of instant lust...
Lastly, full on sex is a messy business, it's not common to say as much. I've had characters in pieces afterwards, it appeals to my sadistic side. They want mind-blowing sex, expect their nether regions to be a sore and muscles to ache for a day afterwards. Once I was told one of the sexiest feelings after sex, is you can still feel it there hours later.
For me, this sums it up best.
"Sex loses all its power and magic when it becomes explicit, mechanical, overdone, when it becomes a mechanistic obsession. It becomes a bore. You have taught us more than anyone I know how wrong it is not to mix it with emotion, hunger, desire, lust, whims, caprices, personal ties, deeper relationships that change its colour, flavour, rhythms, intensities.": Anais Nin.
Sure, it definitely loses me votes and story appeal, people like to be told what is happening. I like to show people and make people guess.
In my stories I try to explore the way negative emotions, especially the feeling of humiliation, can become erotically charged. It’s made me see the limitations of a genre that has defined expectations about the emotional tone of a story and how a story can lose its status as erotica through the emphasis of some experiences over others, even when sexual experience is the primary content of the story.
Something I do all the time that seems to be uncommon is interludes/cool-downs during sex scenes. People get too overheated after an orgasm and need a drink, but that doesn't mean the night is over. Girls head for the bathroom after sex. Little things like that. It's more than just a mention. It usually involves some conversation, maybe some laughter, and sometimes even a plot thread or two.
Negative emotions, angst, lying... first person, present narrative which is difficult to work with, but does for a slightly unstable character. I imagine the reader as his conscience.
