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Quote by Saucymh
I find the sex far harder to write than the story. I quite often write the whole story with the words "inventive sex" inserted wherever it will eventually be needed. I find it incredibly hard to find new ways to describe the sex.


let me help with some of my best phrases:

he put stuffed his drain pipe into her hooha and wiggled it about like a snake on fire.

"Shazam!" she cried out while bouncing up and down on his dingdong.

he spun her around like a top until she was on her back, her legs spread like an elastic chicken, one toe doing a slow rhumba in the air. be began slapping her hairy fluffadoodle with his monster shlong until they both exploded in a flurry of super duper hotness.

no charge smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

I can't have two guys suddenly show up to a lesbian story! Or make the black man in an interracial story suddenly have red hair or something! LOL!


In my twisted mind, your statement should become the challenge for the next story!! It would be a true adventure. And I've known a few natural redheaded black guys! One, a black Irish gentleman, of the finest/proper heritage! I use to tease him for his interest in "running with use plain folk"; he defending self, as seeking to escape from the "starched shirt world" that he came from!

As you can see, I see the "event" then muse the event into a story line, building outwards in discovery of the their history, if that makes any sense to anyone! Fluffing out the flesh of the story as it spins forth.
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he spun her around like a top until she was on her back, her legs spread like an elastic chicken, one toe doing a slow rhumba in the air. be began slapping her hairy fluffadoodle with his monster shlong until they both exploded in a flurry of super duper hotness.


I HAVE to get that into my next story. It's genius

You call it a fluffadoodle too? Who knew
I definitely find the sex harder to write. It probably no less true for story but I always have this sense that the sex part of my writing offers nothing new or I struggle with describing it in a new way. I have a ton of stories almost complete but I'm not happy with the sex part. Story seems to just flow rather effortlessly.
Quote by sprite
story is easy. sex scenes are harder, not because they're hard, but because you need to make them interesting, and there's only so many ways to write sex.


Fluffa-WOT???
Quote by Burquette
Story is so much harder for me. So is character, for that matter (Wait! This is supposed to be an exhibitionism story. My main character is an ex-nun. Bad choice! It'll take too many words to get her there....).

The truth is that I put in far more thought, energy, and effort into plot than I do the sex scenes. They just don't require it. Hopefully, I've already set up the motivation and the emotional consequences. Now all I need is a good action sequence.


ditto
Quote by Meggsy
In my minds eye I have an idea.When I start writing the story begins to flow and come together. Basically my story develops as I write. There can be quite a bit of rewriting as an idea formed later in the plot sometimes does not fit with an earlier situation. The sex is introduced as the story progresses early in some and later in others.
The sex part is difficult as I try and vary the way the characters approach the meaty bits and then engage in a way that I wish to vary from a way I have used before. That is the hard part as sex is sex and I often draw on a personal experience to try and make it as interesting for the reader as it was for me at the time.
My longest story so far was my three part story of The School Boy and the Farmers wife. In this the lives of the characters and the sex had to progress from a schoolboy experience to that of a man with an experienced and married woman.


when I start writing the story grows feet & goes places I never even thought about
Neither. I just find the whole WRITING thing sometimes doesn't come to me. But once I get going, it's fine.