Genitalia Reference

26 Aug 2016

Quote by Robert0909

Or voluptuous Vulva, Quivering Quim, or (Couldn't improve this one) YUMMY Yoni?

QUIVERING QUIM ... That's VERY good???

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26 Aug 2016

Quote by RavenStar
For me, it often depends on the tone of the sex. If it's emotional and romantic, slow and sensual, I tend to stick with more flowery terms, like core, center, chanel, lips, folds, slit, and pussy. Something more active, more passionate, will earn words like cunt, snatch, quim, and the ones above with more vivid descriptors, like tight, eager, dripping, hungry, needy, swollen. The most depraved of scenes that I will write tend to use terms like fuckhole, along with very hedonistic descriptors and the other words above.

It's all about being creative within the kind of scene that you're wanting to paint.

I agree with this. It really does depend on the piece.

What I don't want is to get so creative that it distracts from the sex. If I call it her Venus Flytrap, you're not going to be thinking about what I want you to during the sex scene.

26 Aug 2016

Quote by Burquette

I agree with this. It really does depend on the piece.

What I don't want is to get so creative that it distracts from the sex. If I call it her Venus Flytrap, you're not going to be thinking about what I want you to during the sex scene.

Unless you're actually wanting to equate the woman's foofaloof (hi Liz) to the carnivorous plant. In which case, okay... ;)

26 Aug 2016

Quote by RavenStar

Unless you're actually wanting to equate the woman's foofaloof (hi Liz) to the carnivorous plant. In which case, okay... ;)

Exactly. Maybe it's going to consume his Love stick.

26 Aug 2016

Quote by BethanyFrasier
There are much worse terms than pussy, but for a bit of variety, how about vulva, quim, or yoni (one of my favorite terms, from Hindi)

One of my lovers always referred to my vagina as my Yoni. He found the reference in the Karma Sutra - now I know is origin - thanks Beth.
I will remember that when I write my next story - it has a nice sound to it - the word - not my Yoni.
I have never heard it referred to as a Sperm Bank until I read it here.- Deposits are frequent in mine and a withdrawal always follows.

27 Aug 2016

Thant is a good word, I may use it if that is okay, licking her Yoni sounds better than cunt.

Quote by Meggsy

One of my lovers always referred to my vagina as my Yoni. He found the reference in the Karma Sutra - now I know is origin - thanks Beth.
I will remember that when I write my next story - it has a nice sound to it - the word - not my Yoni.
I have never heard it referred to as a Sperm Bank until I read it here.- Deposits are frequent in mine and a withdrawal always follows.

Old in chronological age. But young at heart and desire.

27 Aug 2016

I need to refine the times I may use the words and in context to the sex action, I found a lot by searching slang for vagina.
But as mentioned I do not want a word to distract from the moment in the story.

Quote by Burquette

I agree with this. It really does depend on the piece.

What I don't want is to get so creative that it distracts from the sex. If I call it her Venus Flytrap, you're not going to be thinking about what I want you to during the sex scene.

Old in chronological age. But young at heart and desire.

27 Aug 2016

Quote by Buz
Cunt and twat are great words to use during sex. What is especially great is for both the guy and the woman to both use the words in expressing their passion. Those words let you both know, you're really fucking. not just having sex, but FUCKING!

When she yells out at me, "Fuck my slutty cunt!" Wow! That does the trick.

Two of my favorite words for genitalia (though I don't think I have an ultimate favorite, but I do love these) are 'snatch' for pussy and 'tallywhacker' for dick. Though saying 'tallywhacker' used during sex might cause you to giggle. But if you're married or long time and truly impassioned, a few laughs while fucking doesn't hurt at all and certainly doesn't hinder anything.

'Snatch' is a great word to use anytime, even while fucking. "Oh, babe, your damn snatch is really dripping. It's oozing all down my chin."

Sex requires a lot of noise, talking, and intense physical passion! Dirty words make it great!

Only a true southern boy could appreciate the terms, snatch and tallywhacker...takes me back to my youth growing up in south Georgia. Love it, Buz, when you include these terms in your stories.

28 Aug 2016

my thoughts suggest description of genitals should be sexy without being vague. more important I think is not to be coarse, descriptions like fuck hole and shit tube are nasty and juvenile and I think twat verges on the coarse side as well. again if you wish to use pussy add adjectives eg hot pussy, fat pussy. drooling, quivering,soft, hard, excited, fat. the list of "what types of pussy" are numerous sorry I used "fat" twice, got excited

4 Sep 2016

I do appreciate you feedback as well as everyone else. Since my stories are mostly graphic I often refer to the penis and vagina.
Everyone's suggestion will help me with future stories to have more variety in my descriptions.

Quote by traddis
my thoughts suggest description of genitals should be sexy without being vague. more important I think is not to be coarse, descriptions like fuck hole and shit tube are nasty and juvenile and I think twat verges on the coarse side as well. again if you wish to use pussy add adjectives eg hot pussy, fat pussy. drooling, quivering,soft, hard, excited, fat. the list of "what types of pussy" are numerous sorry I used "fat" twice, got excited

Old in chronological age. But young at heart and desire.

7 Sep 2016

My preference is to keep the language simple and direct. I tend to just stick with 'pussy,' sometimes 'vagina' or 'hole.' I use 'cunt' sparingly (though, given the response on this thread, I may use it more). For males, it's a cock, penis, or dick. I avoid most euphemisms, because I find them silly and childish. As a reader, any time I come across a sentence like "he slipped his throbbing meaty purple love hammer into her waiting squishy pink tunnel of pleasure" I'm done.

The thing about flowery language is that it distracts from the plot of the story (if the author has actually bothered with one - many authors don't) by drawing attention to the author's verbal prowess. It's showboat-y, and often done very clumsily. It doesn't add to the writing, it just gets in the way.

Don't believe everything that you read.

7 Sep 2016

Quote by RavenStar
Unless you're actually wanting to equate the woman's foofaloof (hi Liz) to the carnivorous plant. In which case, okay... ;)

I just saw this, lol. Don't forget about flimflamalam!

Edit: Has no one mentioned coochie? I love coochie.

@Lizerotica

7 Sep 2016

Quote by Liz

I just saw this, lol. Don't forget about flimflamalam!

Edit: Has no one mentioned coochie? I love coochie.

I love coochie too.

8 Sep 2016

Quote by Liz

I just saw this, lol. Don't forget about flimflamalam!

Edit: Has no one mentioned coochie? I love coochie.

I really love flimflamalam! biggrin

Okay, no, it's funny, but no. Coochie, though. There's a cute one I could definitely get in front of. No, I didn't say that wrong. ;)

30 Sep 2016

Quote by Stormdog

Are Hootie and the Blowfish still a thing? Those names could work! And I thought yoni was that fusion/ new age musician guy. Wait, that's Yanni, I guess.

I'll occasionally use "her sex" (sparingly) or some euphemism like "her wet heat" or "Her velvet sheath" or "her tight, wet, needy, pulsating tunnel of love". On second thought, I've never used that last one in a story. I should jot that down. But for me, pussy tends to win the day. Cunt almost never, for some reason. Negative connotations for me, I think.

I hate the word & refuse to use cunt...

Are you sure?