What do you think is the best line you've written, not neccessarily in Lush, but just in general. I hope this is the correct place for it.
Mine's "This effectively gave him the ability to fuck anyone he wanted, both literally and metaphorically with near impunity." (After describing that the President is a pornographer for 3 pages)
And I've only begun fucking with you people.
At the end of the day, it's all math.
I don't have a specific favorite line.
I love them all
I don't have a specific favorite line.
I love them all
"Her face wore an enigmatic smile reminiscent of the Mona Lisa."
From "Out for Dinner", an earlier effort written with Alphmagus, and still a favourite story of mine.
"Fate whispered in my ear the night the flames appeared."
"There is a God and he's a chef in Malibu."
Her kiss the color of love, her scent of mistletoe on Christmas Eve
You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
Her whole world was in one girl, this perfect angel, saving her with velvet walls.
"I have a friendly pussy."
"The Gods that smiled when you were born
are laughing now."
This baited 'best line' thread has hooked some beauties; to it may I add my uncontroversial wriggling minnow:
So, Old Nick nicks our knickers, steals the kinky drawers of vicars, while the fallen angels frolic - a black mass of diabolic lycra, leather, latex lingerie for his Satanic Majesty.
"If I sign off with pithy quotations, ignore all preceding opinion for I am undoubtedly a fool. And if, after our discourse, I abuse you by proffering my vulgar produce, cast me into the gutter."
With hopeful expectation
My heart blows one last kiss...
I really wish I could say that one of the lines I've written focusing on being descriptive, or insightful, or poetic, or concise wins my 'favorite line' that I've written award.
...Buuut instead it goes to the line, "That idiot! That great Noble twat!".
Mostly because I can't read it even once without laughing for some reason.
I'm easily amused >.>
Couldn't pick just one... from Queen Fatatat's Curse
He watched frozen with fear as his breakfast, lunch and dinner flew in slow motion over the red satin sheets.
Jack grinned, he’d always known some of the blokes envied his massive cock, but having one so big he needed a wheelbarrow to carry it around in….well that beat all.
I remember things in images so when I write I'm really kind of reliving them. In"My Wife's Pantyless Night Out". I was seeing the image of me looking at her when it wrote this.
"If you have never experienced someone looking at you with eyes that you just want to fall into and drown while they are smiling and kissing you, you've missed a major development point in your poor poor life."
I still feel that way now, 43 years later.
Whilst describing in a manuscript what it was like to be marooned in the Libyan desert this line encapsulated it all for me:
''Communing with nature and fasting in the wilderness may be the perfect way for an Old Testament prophet to while away the odd month or two but to a virile nineteen year old dying to become part of the new society soon to be called permissive those delights were a little passe.''
A sentence from my Poem "Messy Love":
A blood filled thing
with a slit meant for sliding
drops of salt and sugar and cream and sunlight,
a promise before the rain that my hips rose to meet.
From a romance tale I wrote;
"I desire you're because you're not royalty. . .you're just real."
This is the opening to my Lush story: A Special Photo.
Sensual and seductive, she lay amid the rumpled sheets of the bed where we'd just made love, relaxed and at ease within the golden skin of her petite, perfect body; not posing, not looking at the camera so much as through it, into the photographer, into me…waiting with an expression of amused tolerance for me to finish and rejoin her.
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From, The Toy - A Tom and Annie Story.
By this point I was enjoying the domination of this cute whirlwind of a woman.
My above post is no longer true. I literally just wrote what is the line I am most proud of.
It's near the end of His & Hers Secrets Ch1.5 and will be in the lesbian category.
"She shivers and lowers her hips, giving me easier access to her sweet honey."
Correction from my above comment ( I don't know my own stories!) The line is from 'The Birthday Treat' Doh!
Alas this is not my line but one I read in a novel and used it in a Birthday Card to my Wife as it perfectly described how I feel about her.
"I love you more than I did yesterday but not as much as I will tomorrow"
from my poem MY GREEN EYED TEMPTRESS ...."...pools of love laced with golden glitter"
(and I STILL feel that way about her.) ... (((S/B)))
EDIT note: It slipped my mind that I had made a similar comment above on the 18th.
