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"Jimmy Chen and Clayton Radcliffe take the final step towards collecting $50,000 for assassinating Julie Koop."

Jimmy Chen and Clayton Radcliffe sat parked at the back end of the parking lot at Willowbrook Mall.  They were meticulously observing the bustling shopping mall through a pair of binoculars. Their faces remained hidden beneath baseball caps and dark sunglasses offering an air of anonymity as they surveyed the crowd below.  The mall's vibrant exterior, adorned with colourful storefronts and a sea of shoppers provided the perfect cover for their surreptitious activities.

As they focused their binoculars on different areas of the mall, their expressions revealed a sense of urgency and anticipation.  They were staking the mall out planning their hit on Julie Koop.  They had both agreed that the mall would be the best place to carry out the hit for two main reasons. First of all, it provided the most options for a clean getaway.  And second of all, Julie was known to frequent the mall on Wednesday afternoons for her nail appointments.  She wouldn’t see it coming.

The tension mounted as they continued their surveillance, aware that one wrong move could jeopardize the entire hit. The fate of Julie Koop, and the violent course of events about to unfold hinged on the information they had spent days gathering.

“She’ll most likely come out of the Walmart entrance over there,” Jimmy said as he pointed towards the doors of the large sprawling department store.

“She’ll have to park in the west lot because they got the east parking lot closed for repaving. She drives a very distinct red Mustang with a black soft top, you can’t miss it.”

Clayton nodded in approval. The two hitmen had gathered all the information they needed about Julie Koop from one of Bronson‘s crooked connections at the DMV.

“From there, she’ll most likely walk down in front of the Walmart and towards the corner of the building, which is perfect.  She’ll have nowhere to run.  There’s nothing around the corner but a back alleyway that leads to loading bays.  It’s a dead end at the back and if she tries to run, and she goes down there, she’s fucked, it’s all fenced off on the side.”

Clayton slowly nodded as he listened to Jimmy.  Clayton felt a slight sense of unease inside him.  He always hated carrying out hit jobs and had hoped that at this point in his gangster lifestyle, he would’ve elevated himself high enough to no longer have to do them. He dreamt of the day that he could give the orders, and somebody else would carry them out.

“You ever get nervous before doing this shit?” he asked Jimmy.

“Not really.  My last one maybe,” Jimmy replied.

“Oh yeah?” Clayton asked.

“Yeah.  He was a color-wearing member of the Hells Angels, very high ranking.  The guy walked around with eyes in the back of his head too, constantly surrounded by his biker buddies.  I had no idea how to pull it off, took me months to get it done”

“Fuck, that was you?  You took out Randy Johnson?” Clayton asked as he looked over at Jimmy.

“Yep.”   

Clayton made an expression that suggested he was impressed with Jimmy's resume.

“For Bronson?” Clayton asked.

“Yeah, for Bronson.”

Clayton placed the binoculars to his eyes and scanned the front of the mall for a moment while Jimmy continued his story.

“I parked across the street from their clubhouse down on Eastleigh Cresent and caught him coming back on his Harley.  Gunned him down right there.  Ballsy as fuck, but Bronson was paying me a hundred grand for that one.  I barely made it out of there, thank God all the traffic lights were green.”    

“I didn’t know Bronson was going at it with the Hells Angels,”  Clayton said.

Jimmy nodded.

“Been going at it with the Angels for years.  Honestly, I’m surprised Bronson is still alive.  These days he spends most of his life hanging out on that yacht of his and fucking any pussy he can get his hands on.  He’s developing a certain paranoia these days, scared of dying, and scared of leaving his yacht.”

“I don’t blame him.  A lot of people want him dead.  When you live to be fifty-eight in our line of work you have a lot of enemies,” Clayton said.

A look of introspection came over Clayton’s face, his thoughts were growing a little bit deeper.

“That’s it though, isn’t it? For guys like us?  Dead or in the can.  If you make it to your fifties, you’re gonna spend your life creeping around like a ninja in the shadows. It’s only a matter of time at that point.  Our shelf life sucks.”

Clayton thought about his mortality much more than Jimmy did because he had a wife at home and they were talking about having a baby.  Jimmy said nothing.

“So, you and Bronson close?” Clayton asked.

“Nah, not really. It’s a paycheck.  Riddick pays well for a hit, but he expects it done fast.  I don’t think he has a lot of close friends these days, he can’t afford to.  It’s lonely at the top.  I don’t envy him, and I hope I never find myself there, in his shoes.  Completely incapable of trusting anyone, surrounded by women who only like you because of your money.  A sad life.”

Clayton had always lived life on the edge, embracing a criminal lifestyle that had become his grim reality.  He had been entangled in a web of deceit, theft, and violence from his early teens. It was a life that had promised money, protection from bullying, and most importantly, beautiful women.  As he looked back on the drug deals and murders he had made, he couldn't help but feel a growing sense of remorse. The faces of those he had harmed, and the lives he had ended sometimes haunted him like ghosts.

Clayton worried about the uncertain future that lay ahead. His criminal exploits had left him with few friends, and his enemies were numerous and unforgiving. The fear of retribution and the consequences of his actions had begun to consume him. He yearned for a chance to make amends, to find a path away from the darkness that had defined his life for so long. The uncertainty of what the future held, and the relentless worry that he might never escape the grip of his past haunted his every waking moment.

In that moment, he felt a sick feeling in his stomach and thought to himself: This is it! Just this one last kill, and I’m out!  Whoever Julie Koop is, I don’t care.  Just this one last hit.’

That thought alone, the thought of freedom from the violence, and the constant fear of death or incarceration left him feeling lighter and at peace. He felt better than he had in years.  Tomorrow, he would gun down Julie Koop and walk away from this criminal lifestyle for good.

“Okay, this will do. This is where we’ll take her out, I’m comfortable with it. We’ll have a clean getaway onto the Fraser Highway, and then a quick merge onto the freeway and we’re gone. Easy fifty grand.  There’s a lot of people in the area so we’ll have to be quick!” Jimmy said with satisfaction in his voice.

Jimmy looked at his iPhone.

“Today’s Tuesday, she comes here every Wednesday for nails or hair or whatever.  I’ll pick you up tomorrow at twelve sharp.  That’ll give us a couple of hours to get ready for this, maybe do a couple lines of coke to get cranked up first.  Always helps.” Jimmy said in his usual cold way.

Clayton nodded in agreement as Jimmy turned the key in the ignition of his Hummer, and the two hitmen drove off.

                    ********************

A vibrant red Mustang tore down a winding, sun-drenched road that hugged the coastline, providing a picturesque backdrop of the endless ocean. The sleek, aerodynamic curves of the car glistened in the sunlight.  Behind the wheel, Julie's wind-tousled hair danced in the breeze.  Her thick dark hair was now down to the small of her back, the longest it had ever been.  Her sun-kissed skin and sparkling blue eyes mirrored the exhilaration she felt, giving her a sense of freedom that few experiences could replicate.  It was a blend of beauty and power, both in the form of the car and the woman driving it.

She was on her way to see Jay for lunch.  She knew she was in some trouble, and had some grovelling to do.  The evening before, Julie and Jay had had a tense conversation on the phone about her past issue with gambling and the debts she had acquired.  Jay was angry that Julie had never shared with him anything about her gambling past.  She knew over the next couple of hours that she would have no choice but to open up to Jay. She wasn’t looking forward to it.

Julie wasn’t good with confrontation, and she tried to steer herself away from it as best she could, but in any relationship it is inevitable.  She was guilty of holding her cards too close to her chest. When she was in a relationship, she wasn’t good at opening up to her boyfriends, but she knew now at this moment she had no choice. Jay had a right to know about her past struggles with gambling and had decided that she would open up to him fully, and tell him anything he wanted to know; except the threatening message that Jimmy Chen had left on her phone.  She wasn’t ready to share that.   

When she got to White Rock, she pulled into a parking spot and climbed out to plug a few coins into the parking meter.

“Twelve dollars for three hours?  What a joke!” she said to herself.

Begrudgingly, she pumped some coins into the parking meter and made her way across the street to the small café where she was to meet Jay.

She was hungry and looking forward to a nice little soup and sandwich combo, maybe a grilled ham and cheese and a nice broccoli soup to go along with it.

When she entered the café, she found Jay waiting for her at a small table for two.  The small, quaint café exuded an irresistible old-world charm. Its weathered wooden exterior was adorned with ivy, and a hand-painted sign welcomed guests with whimsical elegance. Inside, the cozy space was adorned with mismatched vintage furniture, softly worn Persian rugs, and the gentle hum of patrons savouring espresso and freshly baked pastries. Sunlight streamed through the windows, casting dappled patterns on checkered tabletops, creating the perfect ambiance for quiet conversations and contemplative moments. Julie had always been fond of this little lunch place.

On this particular day, it wasn’t busy, Jay watched as she crossed the floor of the small café towards him, and a warm smile crept across his face, his heart swelled with affection. Julie’s beauty was a source of endless wonder to him, he loved the way her eyes sparkled and changed colour, sometimes a light dazzling blue, and sometimes a darker blue with a little bit of green mixed in.  Her hair cascaded down her back, it was thick and healthy.  Her thick thighs and big ass were wonderfully accented by a smaller waist, the over-exaggerated hourglass figure that he loved.

Jay could see that Julie was gaining some weight, but she was still holding it well, it always seemed to go to all the right places.  At that moment, he couldn't help but reflect on how fortunate he was to have her in his bed most nights of the week.

Jay stood up to kiss her as her eyes took in his chiselled body, always a testament to his hours of relentless training and discipline. Every muscle group was defined and proportioned, from the bulging biceps to his washboard abs, creating a mesmerizing sight that turns heads. His broad shoulders and a V-shaped torso give him a commanding presence, his confidence and poise as impressive as his physique, making him a magnetic and alluring figure to behold.  Julie loved having him, she loved having this strong, alpha male on her arm in public, she felt completely safe in every way when she was in his presence.

They both ordered lunch and took their time enjoying their meals, enjoying some meandering small talk between lovers.  Their chemistry was strong enough to withstand moments of silence between them that could sometimes go on for a few minutes.  Julie knew that the inevitable questions about her gambling past were coming.

“I’m sorry I got bitchy on the phone last night,” Jay said keeping his eyes on his lunch.

“It’s okay, babe,” Julie responded.

“It’s just that I worry about you, you know that. I love you so much it’s stupid. If anything ever happened to you…”

“I’ll be fine,” she responded.

“See, that’s what pisses me off!  You’re acting so blasé about this. These men, these gangster types, you don’t mess around with these people.  What were you thinking about borrowing money from somebody like Jason Leather?  Where do you think he was getting his money from? He’s not Elon Musk.”

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Julie felt her ego getting the better of her, she had a hard time accepting responsibility for her mistakes.  She could be stubborn, and she hated apologizing.

“It’s an addiction.  When you’re in that space you don’t think straight, Jay,” she said with a raised voice.

Jay's concern wasn’t so much about Julie‘s gambling past, but rather the debt she’d acquired and who that money was owed to.

“That’s what these low-level dope dealers do Jules, they borrow money from someone higher up in the chain of command, and then lend it out at a higher rate than they originally borrowed it for.  It doesn’t matter that Leather is dead, somewhere out there is a gangster who gave Leather that money, and he’s gonna want it back.  Debts don’t die in a hail of bullets.”

Julie knew that the inevitable question was coming about how much she owed.  She answered the question before Jay could even ask it.

“I don’t know exactly how much I was gambling away. It was probably quite a lot.  Probably about 200,000, maybe 300,000.  I know it was adding up.”

“Jesus,” Jay said silently under his breath.

“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you, baby. I should have.”

A minute of silence fell between them.

“I don’t need an apology, babe.”

There was a sense of calm that came over them.  They sat in comfortable silence finishing their lunch.

“So what got you hooked?  Slot machines?” Jay asked.

“Everything, but mostly roulette.  I was doing a ton of cocaine as well.  Not cheap.”

Jay nodded in sympathetic understanding.

“Mr. Perfect over here hey?   You must have some skeletons in your closet,” Julie said sarcastically.

“Nope, I’m a good boy,” Jay replied dead seriously.   

“Yeah right buddy,” Julie said, almost in a whisper.

“Look at my body Jules.  Where do you think this comes from? A life of endless partying, or salads for dinner every day? Look, just promise me you’ll share with me okay?  You can be open with me, you can tell me anything. I won’t judge you.”

“I will,” Julie said feeling a small twinge of guilt.  She hadn’t told Jay about the threatening phone call she had received.  She just couldn’t, not yet anyway.

“Do you know what you need right now, baby?” Julie teased.

Jay was trying to be mad, but a smile broke out across his face.  He knew he couldn’t stay mad at Julie.  Underneath the table, she ran her foot up his leg to his dick and gently rubbed it with the soul of her shoe.

“You need my fat lips sliding up and down the shaft of your hard dick right now!”

“Ug.  Why are we guys cursed to a life of being powerless to our dicks?” Jay said with the sound of surrender in his voice.

Jay hadn’t had an orgasm for a couple of days and he was horny as hell, and Julie knew his next cum shot would be a big one.

“Let’s go back to your place sweetie, I want to play with that big cock of yours; I’m gonna drive you fucking crazy.  I want to feel your dick getting harder and harder, I wanna feel it swelling up in my hands while I kiss you until it’s throbbing in front of me and I can’t help but bring my mouth down on it.  I’m gonna tease you, so good baby, I’m gonna take you right to the edge of orgasm, and right when you’re about to blow, I’m gonna drop you down before building you up all over again!  I want to taste your salty pre-cum, I want to feel the head of your dick hitting the back of my mouth while you moan…”

“You are a little nympho, ain’t ya?” Jay said, his dick already well on its way to being fully hard in his pants.

“Like you hate it.  I’m-”

“Okay okay,” Jay interrupted, “Let’s go!”

Jay dropped some cash on the table and they quickly exited the café strolling hand-in-hand along the road that led to Jay’s apartment overlooking a breathtaking vista. Their fingers interlocked as they moved in sync with each other's steps, their connection palpable in the gentle squeeze of their intertwined hands. With each stride, their hearts beat in harmony, and a soft, contented smile graced their faces, illuminated by the bright sun. Julie could feel her arousal growing as her hair danced in the breeze.  To their left the ocean unfurled beside them as Jay leaned in to steal a tender kiss, they were lost in a world of their own.

Before long, they arrived at Jay’s apartment, he unlocked the door, and the second they were inside their lips came together in a long, passionate kiss as their hands explored each other‘s bodies.  Julie brought her hands down to his crotch and felt his solid fully erect cock through his tight jeans.

“Bed or couch?” Julie asked.   

Jay said nothing and walked across the living room to his big leather couch and sat down, his body was coursing with sexual excitement.  He tapped his iPhone screen a couple of times, and some mellow, sexy music began playing on his Bluetooth speaker.

“Gotta set the mood,” he said.

The world around Jay seemed to slow down, and at that moment, he felt mellow and relaxed, a sense of tranquillity washing over him. Yet there was a subtle undercurrent of excitement bubbling within him too, he felt the flutter of butterflies in his stomach. The anticipation of an upcoming blow job mingled with a release of adrenaline that left his whole body gently vibrating.  He knew what Julie‘s talented mouth and hands were capable of, she had brought him to orgasm hundreds of times.  She had a way of holding him on the edge of orgasm for as long as she chose, at times bringing him so close to the edge that he was sure he was going to cum. Yet once he was certain he had passed the point of no return Julie had a way of bringing him back down once again and repeating the cycle.

Julie revelled in the power she held over him, holding his solid cock in her hand and controlling if and when he orgasms, it’s what she loved about sucking Jay's dick.  She was an expert at reading his rising pleasure, the throbbing of his dick, the gentle vibrations on the inside of his thighs, and even his increasing breath rate, all signs that she could read and control with expert precision.  She knew exactly when he was about to cum, and she was a professional at dropping him back down and holding him on the edge.

Jay’s cock was beautiful, when fully erect it came up to his belly button, a perfect seven inches.  Jay was immaculately groomed, his chest and stomach waxed, and his balls shaven the way Julie liked it.

She kneeled in front of Jay as he leaned back on the couch and she brought her pretty little hands down on his throbbing cock gently stroking it from top to bottom.  Her long fingernails, perfectly manicured with bright pink nail polish gently teased his tight nuts sack, making him call out in pleasure.

“Oh fuck,” Jay murmured.

“Mmm.  Do you like that, baby?” Julie said with her sexy, seductive voice.

Jay didn’t answer. He was looking down at Julie, watching her gracefully tease his hard dick.  He was powerless by the way Julie would start every blowjob with five minutes of gentle teasing with her hand, a slow, seductive hand job to get his dick fully hard and throbbing; it drove Jay crazy with desire.  It was inevitable that her warm, talented mouth would soon come down on the head of his cock, ramping the intensity up and sending waves of pleasure through his cock and up into his stomach.

Julie looked directly into Jay’s dark eyes while slowly stroking his cock.

“You ready, babe?” she asked in a tone of voice that was mixed with power and seduction.

“Fuck yeah,” Jay replied.

Jay threw his head back in pleasure as Julie’s lips came down on the head of his cock, the warmth of her mouth sending wonderful and relaxing energy through his body.  She started slow and teasing, running her tongue around the head of Jay’s cock while gently tickling his balls with her long fingernails leaving no nerve ending unstimulated.  Jay was in heaven.

Julie felt her clit starting to tingle, her pussy getting wet.  She could feel her nipples hardening as a rush of adrenaline coursed through her, but she had no intention of cumming as well.  Julie was a giver, and she loved performing oral on her men.

Jay felt his orgasm building as Julie’s lips began slowly sliding up and down the shaft of his cock, the orgasmic sensation spreading deeper into his stomach and down the back of his legs, he wasn’t going to last long.

“Fuck that feels so fucking good baby!” Jay said as he looked down at Julie, giving him the blowjob of his life.

Julie didn’t respond, instead keeping her lips on his cock, slowly sliding her warm mouth up and down his throbbing shaft.  Jay’s breath rate was starting to increase and Julie detected it, her blue eyes had now turned to a light green as they often did when she was turned on.

Julie took her mouth off Jay’s cock and continued stroking it with her right hand.

“You’re getting close to cumming, I can always tell,” she said with an evil little smile.

“Fuck I’m gonna!” Jay responded.

After fifteen straight minutes of Julie’s talented mouth sliding up and down the shaft of his dick, Jay’s balls were now tight against his body, always a sign that his orgasm was imminent.  Julie knew that all she had to do was stroke his cock a little faster and a little harder, and it would bring him over the edge.  Jay was now close to the point of no return, the moment when he no longer had control of his orgasm and had no choice but to surrender to the pleasure.

“Jules, I’m gonna cum, fuck…”

“Mmmm, then why don’t you?”

Julie began stroking his cock hard and fast to bring him over the edge. Suddenly, Julie could feel a few small contractions in the shaft of Jay’s cock that signal the very first stages of his orgasm.  Seconds later, a rope of cum shot from the head of his dick, coming down on his washboard abs as his orgasm peaked.

“That should’ve been all over my face,” Julie silently said to herself.

Julie kept stroking Jay’s cock until his orgasm started to subside, and every last drop of his jizz had been squeezed out of his balls.  Jay was breathing heavily and trying to get back to his senses after Julie’s expert handjob had brought him over the edge, his stomach was covered in his own cum. Julie could feel the warmth of his cum on the back of her hand as she brought her mouth down and playfully kissed the head of his cock knowing just how sensitive Jay gets after an orgasm.   He was still hard, but she knew his dick would soon start shrinking.

She once again brought her mouth back down onto his dick and began gently sucking it, knowing that all those nerve endings in the head of his cock would still be sensitive.  Julie was a master at bleeding every last ounce of pleasure out of an orgasm, she never abandoned a man’s cock until it was starting to shrink.  Once Jay's cock was too soft for her to work with, she brought her lips up to Jay’s and kissed him, Jay could smell the mild scent of his cum on Julie’s lips which didn’t bother him.

Julie didn’t stick around long.  After giving Jay a blowjob that was sure to keep his eyes crossed for a week, she stepped out of Jay’s apartment as an emptiness filled her.  The streets were bustling with life, but within her, a sense of detachment with Jay immediately settled in. Their physical connection had always been electric, a magnetic pull that brought them together time and time again. Yet, after sex, she couldn't ignore the void of spiritual connection that lingered between them, an emptiness that no amount of passion could fill.

Walking away from his place, she found herself lost in thought. Their relationship had been defined by the intensity of their physical and sexual attraction, but now she longed for a deeper connection.  She yearned for a love that extended beyond the boundaries of the physical realm, where hearts and souls could truly intertwine. As she made her way back to her car she couldn't help but question whether staying in a relationship with Jay solely on physical desire was enough to sustain her happiness and sense of completeness.  She found herself yearning for Brad.

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