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Vast as the ocean

"A very small poem about something very big"

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When our hearts are apart
With an ocean between
When our only connection
Are some words on a screen

Still the love that we share
Is as deep as the sea
And as vast as the ocean
That's between you and me

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Written by patokl
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Comments

I like this one a lot!!
A sweet piece that speaks volumes. A lovely and beautiful thought. Nice job with this. Sending you a five...xo
Short but not simple, just oh so true for so many. Lovely, but distance is so trying at times. Thank you for writing again.
short but as sweet as any sonnet~ beautiful
I had hoped to be the first to comment ... but, since I did get to see the "pre-release"... :) As I said before - touché. Directly to the point. Thank you.
Lots of love in a small poem. Beautiful
That is quite charming, sir.
Beautiful my sweet friend. A lovely poem and true about so many people loving from a distance. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful in so few words. Thank you so much for sharing a heartfelt poem. Have a wonderful day :)