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It was just another summer day in the south, about 93 degrees and not too humid. It was my first summer in a different state, and I was determined to make the best out of it with the friends I have made over the school year. There is this festival that always occurs in the summer in this little city on the edge of Tennessee called RiverBend, and from what I know it was just a bunch of drunk rednecks with country music. All the comments were from biased people who just hate country music, but believe me, If it is anyone that hates country music it is me, but I was willing to give the festival a try. I dressed as if I was going to a concert, wearing a white t-shirt with jeans, white nikes, and a Chicago white sox snapback. My friend Steven came to the door to pick me up with his other friends.

"Hurry up, we are almost late!" Hunter said.

We rushed out downtown to where the stage is, and tried to get a good place to see the performers. As we were walking around talking to people from school we knew, I accidentally bumped into a girl.

"Sorry," I said, "I should look at where I am going next time."

"No Problem" she said. I started to walk away to go back with my friends, and then all of a sudden, the girl I bumped into was saying my name.

"Devin?" I turned around quickly, recognizing the voice.

"Amber?", I said. It was her, the first girl I talked to and my first crush when I moved down here. Amber was one of those girls who were beautiful and knew it. She is about 5'4" with long brown hair, C sized breasts, a thick ass and the most amazing green eyes you will ever see. She gave me a hug and we talked about who we saw and who was playing at the time. Everything was going great until I saw her friend who was next to her but I did not even look at her until I felt someone staring at me. She was basically a clone of amber, except with DD breasts, amber eyes, and 2 inches shorter than her.

"Hi", is what I said when I noticed her standing right beside amber. She just waved and smiled lightly.

"She is shy", Amber said. "Her name is Payton, Payton, this is Devin."

"Hi," she said, very lightly and smiling big when she said it. Her beautiful eyes just gazing at me as we stared at each other for a second.

"Well bye" Amber said, then her and Payton disappeared into the crowd of people. Only later on into the night I will see her again.

Steven and I were listening to the second band that was on stage when Payton came up to me.

She sat by me, and we started to talk about what she likes to do and her favorite music. I tried my hardest to concentrate, but I could not take my eyes off of her beautiful body.

"Hey, I was wondering if you would like to come over for a night swim, if your parents do not mind" She said.

"That will be no problem, I will just say that I am staying over a friends", I smirked heavily.

"Good", she said and smiled at me back. Steven and I left to go home, as it was getting late and he needed to be home.

"Mom, can I spend the night over my friend's?" My mom was usually ok with me staying over a friends house, so I was not worried at all about her saying no.

"Who's house is it?"

"Steven's", I said.

"Okay" she said. I knew she wouldn't be trouble at all.

I arrived at Payton's house, it was a nice big brown stone house with a pool and jacuzzi in the back, all fenced in. I was about to ring the doorbell when I heard something behind me. It was Payton, thankfully.

"Hi Pay-" "Shhhh!" she whispered, and held my hand to guide me to the back through the fence of her front yard.

"We have to be quiet, okay? My parents are not asleep just yet."

I nodded my head to show that I understood her and followed behind her closely. Once we were in the backyard, I was happy with what I saw. Payton was wearing a tight white bikini, hugging every little curve around her body.

"Hey, I'm happy that you could come here" she said.

"So am I" I said, underneath my breath.

She hugged me, with her hard nipples poking me in the chest through her bikini and my shirt. I felt great, and then I noticed that I had a oncoming erection. She started to walk down the stairs to the dimly lit pool, when she stopped and looked at me and said

"You brung swim shorts right?"

Fuck, is the word I screamed in my mind, because I brought everything I needed except for swim shorts. All I had now was my boxers for swim shorts, and my erection was at full force. Luckily, Payton could not see it in the dark.

She said, sounding a bit frustrated, "What are you waiting for? Strip and come in with me." My dick was pounding at that point, and there was no way of stopping it. I took off my shirt, and started to pull down my pants. Payton froze in the water, and her eyes became fixated on my erection. "Oh?", she said.

To be Continued, Maybe...