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I looked around but didn't find a topic like this, so I'll just start one. If I overlooked something: Mea culpa ;-)
From a pure Reader standpoint: What really bugs you off when reading a story. What immediatly turns you off or maybe even makes you stop reading? See it as a chance to vent some and a chance for aspiring writers to learn of some things they can avoid to better the quality and reception of their stories.
To start things a big peeve of mine (and one that just ticked me off twice this morning):
Measurements... what do numericals have to do with eroticism? Why have breasts have to be measured in cup size alone or dicks in inches? What is wrong with adjectives and leaving some things to the readers imagination? Ample, supple, engorged, humungous... need more? ;-)
From a pure Reader standpoint: What really bugs you off when reading a story. What immediatly turns you off or maybe even makes you stop reading? See it as a chance to vent some and a chance for aspiring writers to learn of some things they can avoid to better the quality and reception of their stories.
To start things a big peeve of mine (and one that just ticked me off twice this morning):
Measurements... what do numericals have to do with eroticism? Why have breasts have to be measured in cup size alone or dicks in inches? What is wrong with adjectives and leaving some things to the readers imagination? Ample, supple, engorged, humungous... need more? ;-)
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It is VERY important that a story is believable...at least within the confines of the setting. If you write a Horror- or Sci-Fi story, of course you can do a lot more then in a realistic setting, but even there you have to take great care not to damage the suspension of disbelieve.
In erotica I find this even more important then in, for example, light entertainment. A story where some total jerk (male or female) conquers every encounter just by his or her enormous physical characteristics for example gives me nothing.
In erotica I find this even more important then in, for example, light entertainment. A story where some total jerk (male or female) conquers every encounter just by his or her enormous physical characteristics for example gives me nothing.
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