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ChuckEPoo
2 weeks ago
Straight Male
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I usually have an outline but as I strengthen the characters, I might deviate slightly. As an architect I learned to stay within the plan but tweak the design to accomplish the goal. Writing is an art and the artist has creative license.
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The Tesla is an excellent choice for the planet Chuck! Not to mention the crazy performance.

Tony Seba is a man who knows an awful lot on the subject of electric vehicles and disruptive technologies. He thinks 90% of all new vehicles produced around the globe in 2030, will be electric. And why not? 90% fewer parts, the battery costs will be a fraction of what they are now. No pollution whatsoever. Quite brilliant.

Musk wasn't the first to come up with the idea, but he's a pioneer, and I love his drive to push things forward for the good of the planet and future generations. My next car will be an all electric, if the price comes down enough. I think it's maybe 2 years away before that's the case, with these giga factories coming out.

I got distracted there, sorry. It's a passion of mine, helping the planet, ecosystems, and investing in companies who have that vision in mind.

Back to browsers, no issues with FF other than the FTP file transfer one. I have a backup file uploader so I'm using that. Shame FireFtp doesn't work with the new Quantam FF though. It was my favourite uploader and easiest to use by far.


I’m contacting my son to install FF thanks to Lush feedback. I’ve had the Tesla for a few months. I fortunately can afford it but it took a year to get one. We also have a hybrid for longer trips. Most of our driving is local so it is perfect for us.

I didn’t mind to detract from the thread. Sorry. Thanks for the heads up on Fire Fox.
My son is a programmer and told me to switch. I’m computer challenged and believe the old adage, if it ain’t broke don’t fix it. I still use internet explorer. But I drive a Telsa not a model T.
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write that up as a serious story and i'll totally nom it for an EP award! smile


Ahhh kind of like the six million dollar man. Of course it was paid for by the government because he was playing cricket durning duty in Afghanistan and it was considered a battle wound. Anyway, they designed his new equipment with dial-up options for size speed etc. it was so successful that cricket popularity skyrocketed. Hoorah.
I’d like to see Swinger or Swinging added. Millions of people do it and even more fantasize about it.
Im with Jen. Hot science. Now I can’t get the thought of her opening that lab coat out of my mind.
Hmmm. I chose a Lion as my avatar because I’m really a lamb. My bio is me. Actually Lush has changed me in many ways. I had been married to business for so long I had lost my identity. I think life changes us all. I had never written before outside contracts and legal documents. After I discovered erotica on Lush and attempted to write, I found a new hobby.

I hope I’m perceived as I am. A guy that cares about others and doesn’t need to bring others down to build myself up. But how I’m perceived on Lush is up to you.
I have a suggestion to bring in more income to the site. Create a Friend Of Lush badge you get for gifting a gold or higher membership.
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All of Lushstories major competitors, the large erotic story sites, have as one of their categories and it is hugely popular. It was very popular here for many years. was a Lushstories category a lot longer than it wasn't one. Whether we, you, myself, or anyone else likes it or not, fantasy generates massive views which a site like this translates into ad revenue in order to stay online and financially viable.

There are compromises in every phase of your lives. If anyone says not, then they are lying. So we'd like to keep this great site going and successful.

Before I discovered Lushstories I wrote on another site. That site did not allow and all characters had to be 18 years of age rather than 16. Unfortunately, that site eventually failed financially from poor sponsorship which resulted from a much lower view count. So all the stories I had posted there went away with the site into the abyss of nothingness.

The internet is not run as a communistic or socialistic experiment. Our competitor sites are not going to share their revenue with us to keep us going. It's fucking competition just like real life and the history of the planet. The strongest survive.

Plus, we've gone to great lengths to make this site even more user-friendly and set up for your personal use. YOU CAN BLOCK ANY STORY CATEGORY YOU DON'T LIKE! No one is forced to read any story or category they don't want to. We now have quite a wide range of story category selections. Read the ones you like.


This makes sense to me Buz. I’ve already decided not to participate in fantasy but if it helps the site stay operational I support it. Until this discussion, I wasn’t aware it was in financial trouble. If someone with that knowledge could let me know how much is needed to operate in the black I would appreciate it.
Hmmm in my hands any time I want. In her hands is up to her. Opps ask gals sorry.
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I will post separately about this, later today.


Please don’t bring back the category. It is promoting vile illegal behavior. It is a criminal behavior in all states. For us that were victims of this foul practice Lush was a place that took a rightful position. If it is about increasing viewership then I suggest you try the new categories without and see how it works.

I’m particularly excited about the ‘True’ category.

Just my
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i've had several people contact me after i announced this reward, commenting how much JWren has helped them with their stories, just for the love of it. Looked into it a bit, and yeah, his name's tagged all over the place on a great deal of people's work, some of them pretty established, even. it's not an easy job, and it's time consuming, especially if you take the time to do it right. and, since this is, first and foremost, a writing site, it makes sense that everyone's favorite editor get a little love, so give it up for JWren for being awesome. smile


A very good choice.
Well my blond friend, this is definitely you. Who else would write a poem including road kill?
Not a gal but I would think every every one would be different just like twosomes. Chemistry is either there or it isn’t. For us, we’ve had mixed results. It seems like life is not like a porno.
As boring as it sounds, the golden rule works for me. Always treat others as I would like to be treated.

Be careful how you treat others in your climb to success because you may meet them on your way down.
I was on a job installing when the customer told me. We stopped and watched TV. Being army reserve I was appalled but also aware that this meant I would be called up. Which I was. Now this is the longest war in American history.
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Considering the current political climate and with ethical dilemmas constantly challenging us as individuals, I was wondering how you as a writer feel about the following quote.

To be an artist and to be political is the same thing.
-Chinese dissident Ai Weiwei #WritersLife #AmWriting

Personally I don't write intentionally with an agenda. But with the emotionality of my characters and the "why"of it, I do at times tackle relevant issues that can be an indication of my personal politics. The fact that I always include racial diversity in my writing is an example. Not all writers of color do. I've been criticized for including interracial relationships. Or, I've been told that removing either would help me have more of a mainstream audience. So I agree with the quote.
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Note: Please answer the question presented; this is not a forum to debate your actual political views.


People are politics. Free speech and free press are the backbone of our society. Basicly everything written has political implications or overtones. That means to me that authors must have thick skin because there will be some that will disagree or misconstrue what you say. With the advent of political correctness I think it's worse.
My favorite poem I wrote?


https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/questions-of-love.aspx

Questions Of Love


Is love but a fleeting feeling?
Or something that is true?
Is it just a passing emotion?
Why is it drawing me to you?

Is love about finding beauty?
Why is there so much pain?
Can it truly mend a broken heart?
Can it make me whole again?

Is it love that bonds us together?
Or desire that controls our minds?
Can my love be a soulful promise?
Or did I just simply waste your time?

Is love like a hidden secret?
One that I am so unaware?
Does it lead to greater purpose?
Do you know how much I care?

Is love about seeking forgiveness?
Will it set aside consuming pride?
Will my selfish will bend to yours?
Or just push yours to the side?

Is love the thing the seals us?
Or am I caught by what you say and do?
Is my heart truly filled with love?
Why can't I stop thinking of you?

Is our love the real question?
Could it ever be defined?
Do you feel my soul touching yours?
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I found this article about seven broad-stroke ways that you can improve your story-telling.

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/michael-noll/7-craft-lessons-every-wri_b_3920676.html

The only point I disagreed with was point seven.

There is no magic to writing in short sentences. In fact, I think if you use too many of them, you get a staccato feel and an inability to vary the pacing (short sentences are great for action, less so for description, in my opinion). Poetic language only works if it doesn't get in the way of the story.

Avoiding the chronology trap is something I have to remind myself of. The reader doesn't care what's going on every second. Nor is it important to the story how many steps it is to the bathroom....

Anyway...enjoy. I hope getting a reminder of the basics helps you as much as it does me.


Thank you I'm dedicated to learning the writing craft. I'm finding using dialogue to convey the characters attitudes is more effective than a narrative. I agree with you that action scenes should be short descriptive sentences. I find that the longer almost poetic descriptions are better suited to first person reflections or establishing the mood of a scene.

Reading your work is almost educational in itself. My strength is in story telling. My weakness is in mechanics. I find reading my stories aloud helps in the edit. When I'm alone of course. Lol
Our marriage certificate is not a pinkslip of ownership. "Letting" her infers she is not her own person. I believe if she wanted something in that nature she would discuss it with me as my partner in life. The fantasy of most things doesn't live up to the reality of the situation most of the time.
I've collaborated with SweetestSins, Hotwife4U, and Nymphwriter. Those were all fun but there are many others I'd like to collaborate with.