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Recently I learned an essential guideline for good writing. Granted, I'm not as experienced with writing but I found this to be very useful and wanted to share.

When writing it is better to Show It Not Tell it. Give Information through action and dialog versus narration.

I was known for not following this which I believe made my writing stale. But, now that I've started following this guide I find my writing easier, more fluid and better to read. My latest upcoming story will reflect this, of course it's not complete yet.
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