Story rejected

I have submitted a story and its been returned because of bad grammar can anybody help me ?

Hi Tommy.

You might get a better response if you give us an idea of what kind of story it is and how many words.

Back in the murky timeline of Lush, I had my first story rejected for similar reasons (anomalously punctuated dialogue). Took three submissions before it was accepted.

Grammarly and spellcheck are helpful to an extent.

Depending what country you're from, comma rules vary, but here's some links for punctuation rules

https://www.skillsyouneed.com/write/punctuation1.html

https://www.thepunctuationguide.com/ (American, but has a page for British and American differences in standard punctuation)

You can also look into literary devices. You don't need to know what they're called, but it's always good to have many tools at your disposal to express yourself, even if you're mostly expressing how horny you are. https://www.masterclass.com/articles/22-essential-literary-devices

Hope those help.