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Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently
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I’d be glad to help you
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Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently


Yet there is something about your stories that drags this pedant to not notice your mistakes.

Curvygalore approved my last story and with it gave me some advice too. Which was great of her.

If you want, stick it in a PM and I can give it a once over too. I don't claim to be perfect or even good, but I can promise a fresh set of eyes.

Kite's Kinky Tales

My latest offering -

Once more in Love Poems - My Forever Beauty

My 2 previous submissions:

Both Love Poems

Pearls

As The New Year Dawns

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Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently


Glad to have helped
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Glad to have helped


You are an absolute star!
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