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Please help me edit my story
"the Great God (snicker)" - James 'Bear' Llewellyn
Quote by Upforit200891
Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently
Yet there is something about your stories that drags this pedant to not notice your mistakes.
Curvygalore approved my last story and with it gave me some advice too. Which was great of her.
If you want, stick it in a PM and I can give it a once over too. I don't claim to be perfect or even good, but I can promise a fresh set of eyes.
My latest offering -
Once more in Love Poems - My Forever Beauty
My 2 previous submissions:
Both Love Poems
Please read and enjoy. If you really enjoyed a story someone has written; how about clicking on 'Like' and/or 'Favorite'.
Why not leave a comment too?
Editor at large
Quote by Upforit200891
Please can any one edit and proofread my stories. I'm useless at punctuation and it's driving me nuts. I read and re-read and re-read, edit my story and still cock it up. I look at how it should be done then my brain writes it differently
Glad to have helped
Bonnet Flaunter
Quote by JWren
Glad to have helped
You are an absolute star!
