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Looking for SHORT flash story review

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Emerson501
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I have a flash erotica story that's around 300 words that's ready to be submitted. I'd love a second (or more) pair of eyes if someone is willing. It's about running into an ex-lover. Thanks in advance!
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Emerson501
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Thank you LW!
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Little_wanker
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Interesting idea. Not dirty enough for me but that's just me. Always think very carefully about useing 'literally'.
Emerson501
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Thanks Little, I will literally take you up on that ;).
Seriously though, thank you for taking the time to review my work.
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Little_wanker
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No problem. I think you could make more of it. Perhaps she had an identical twin you didn't know about. Take things further ;-)
Emerson501
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That's an interesting idea...I'm going to noodle that one for a while. That could make for a fun story!
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