I have a story which was rejected, because of the format. English is not my 1st language, I am looking for volunteer editor to make the story readable according to LS standard
I believe you are looking for help with a story and not an essay.
There are quite a few people at Lush that edit and would be willing to help you for no charge.
I've worked with a couple of people for whom English is not their primary language. I'd be glad to help.
JefferyB