Like the title says, just a basic review, I think is all good but I like a second opinion.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
As a new writer here still grappling with getting my first tale verified, I found asking someone who has gotten stuff verified to read your tale and let you know if it works.
Sometimes we're so close the work we can't see the imperfections and flaws.
Getting feedback can be bruising but I'm hoping it makes me a better writer. Best of luck getting your first tale verified, I'm sure it will be a proper sizzler.
Whatever was posted is always meant in love and respect never to offend.
I'm also highly likely to have posted this from a phone so there may be typos or odd word changes, auto correct can be a pain.
I've been listening to my kinky pencil here's my current work
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Just following up Emily,
Did you succeed in getting someone to have a second look over your work?
Whatever was posted is always meant in love and respect never to offend.
I'm also highly likely to have posted this from a phone so there may be typos or odd word changes, auto correct can be a pain.
I've been listening to my kinky pencil here's my current work