I have written part two of my story "Pregnant and desired, part one is on the site. Please could some kind author read it over for me and give me some advice, I am not the world best at punctuation or structure so I would live some constructive help.
Thanks
Sarah xx
I'll take a look! I'm a Story Mod here at Lush... PM me the story, I'll do an Edit and send it back to You. xx Steph
Ok thank you that would be great, will do now xx
I hope that worked out for You! I look forward to seeing your story on our site! xx Steph
Thank you SF you have been a great help xxx
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Hi Sarahshort
I wrte professionally and puctuation is a real pain for me too,yo uvercome this I send my manuscripts off to a professional proof reader here in U K and its done for me, I must say that as she's been working a book for me recently ,I have learnt a great deal by taking notice of her correction,What does it cost: Overe here Ten english pound per thousand words corrected,,where you are I'm sure it will be cheaper. R&R
