I need some help with a story I'm writing...

7 Jun 2015

"Out of this world part 3" has stalled... I'm stuck... Jennifer had just met this new 8 foot tall alien named 'Joguwuamguerbada' and that's where I got stuck...

Both Joguwuamguerbada and Jennifer are subjects for experiments and I don't know what to have them do to build up the story... d'oh!

I will list those who help me out as an contributing author...

8 Jun 2015

hey, what happened to your "Trip to San Diego" story?

8 Jun 2015

Quote by Scorpio2015
"Out of this world part 3" has stalled... I'm stuck... Jennifer had just met this new 8 foot tall alien named 'Joguwuamguerbada' and that's where I got stuck...

Both Joguwuamguerbada and Jennifer are subjects for experiments and I don't know what to have them do to build up the story...

Do you already have the experiments planned? You can make the experiments themselves lead up to the sex, depending on what the experiments are.

8 Jun 2015

Quote by JollyBloke03

Do you already have the experiments planned? You can make the experiments themselves lead up to the sex, depending on what the experiments are.

I've done that, a few times didn't like how they turned out... d'oh!

so far, the experiment tests I've put in this series have been standard medical tests... hmmm.... d'oh!

8 Jun 2015

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hey, what happened to your "Trip to San Diego" story?

I've sent you an email...

8 Jun 2015

Quote by Scorpio2015

I've done that, a few times didn't like how they turned out...

so far, the experiment tests I've put in this series have been standard medical tests... hmmm....

If this is a sci-fi story, however, I wouldn't think that they would use standard medical tests. Perhaps they're testing the two together....and the testers leave to scan the test results, and because of the tests that were run, the two are naked. So they proceed to take an interest in each other and the story goes from there.

8 Jun 2015

Quote by Scorpio2015
"Out of this world part 3" has stalled... I'm stuck... Jennifer had just met this new 8 foot tall alien named 'Joguwuamguerbada' and that's where I got stuck...

Both Joguwuamguerbada and Jennifer are subjects for experiments and I don't know what to have them do to build up the story...

I will list those who help me out as an contributing author...

They could undergo breeding experiments
There could be a power outage and they are put into lock down together
The alien could slip out of examine table restraints and take advantage of your female character
The alien could possess some sort of mind control and make Jennifer masturbate
To add meat to the plot, the Alien could telepathically show Jennifer how they mate on his planet

The possibilities and endless

8 Jun 2015

They could be testing the differing species reactions to environmental stimuli. Take extreme cold for example. They would need to share body heat for Jennifer to survive. A little survivalist cuddling could quickly escalate to full blown interspecies 'relations'. Just me chipping in a suggestion.

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8 Jun 2015

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They could be testing the differing species reactions to environmental stimuli. Take extreme cold for example. They would need to share body heat for Jennifer to survive. A little survivalist cuddling could quickly escalate to full blown interspecies 'relations'. Just me chipping in a suggestion.

I kinda like that Idea, I'll try it out and see how it works out... smile

and If I use it in the final draft I'll list you as an contributing author... :) Thanks for your help!!! :)

19 Jun 2015

Out of this World part 3 is done, now it has been submitted... (Hope it gets approved soon) I'm already planning parts 4, 5, and 6 biggrin

19 Jun 2015

Quote by Jessica_Jones

They could undergo breeding experiments
There could be a power outage and they are put into lock down together
The alien could slip out of examine table restraints and take advantage of your female character
The alien could possess some sort of mind control and make Jennifer masturbate
To add meat to the plot, the Alien could telepathically show Jennifer how they mate on his planet

The possibilities and endless

I may use some of these in parts 4, or 5... smile

If I do, I'll list you as an contributing author :)

19 Jun 2015

Quote by Jessica_Jones

The alien could possess some sort of mind control and make Jennifer masturbate

just a warning that mind control usually strays into non-consent. obviously, each story is taken in context, but just thought i would mention it ;) xx

19 Jun 2015

Quote by Echelon

just a warning that mind control usually strays into non-consent. obviously, each story is taken in context, but just thought i would mention it ;) xx

Excellent point. Mind control is specifically banned in submissions. It would take some very special circumstances that ensure consent is freely given. I'm not sure even then it would be allowed

20 Jun 2015

Quote by Echelon

just a warning that mind control usually strays into non-consent. obviously, each story is taken in context, but just thought i would mention it ;) xx

yeah, I was thinking the same thing but... I did like some of the other ideas... smile

20 Jun 2015

"Out of this world Part 3" is still pending approval but I have started work on part 4 smile

Parts 4 and 5 will be lesbian, with Jennifer is fucking two different female aliens (One of which is an alien/human hybrid)

20 Jun 2015

Quote by Scorpio2015

yeah, I was thinking the same thing but... I did like some of the other ideas...

no worries. just thought i would mention it before you wrote a 10k word epic, lol xx

20 Jun 2015

yeah, that would suck... lol

21 Jun 2015

I'm thinking of using a power outage and Jennifer is put on lockdown with a female alien/human hybrid Lwinking