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6 Jul 2010

Hi

I'm new to the forum. I enjoy the stories here a lot. I decided to "give back to the community" and submit a story of my own, but the problem is that English is my second language. So my English kinda sucks. So, can anybody here go trough my story my story, edit it and make it more readable so that I can post it here? Please respond via direct message and I'll send it to you.

Thanks in advance.

6 Jul 2010

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Hi

I'm new to the forum. I enjoy the stories here a lot. I decided to "give back to the community" and submit a story of my own, but the problem is that English is my second language. So my English kinda sucks. So, can anybody here go trough my story my story, edit it and make it more readable so that I can post it here? Please respond via direct message and I'll send it to you.

Thanks in advance.

I'll be glad to give it a go... I'll send you a PM with the information.

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