First story- would like help in proof reading and suggestions

Had first attempt rejected, re-visited the story and made many adjustments, would like someone to proof read, make any suggestions before re-submitting, thank you

Have you tried using the Grammarly app? I find it indispensable. 🙂

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Had first attempt rejected, re-visited the story and made many adjustments, would like someone to proof read, make any suggestions before re-submitting, thank you

Provided it's less than three thousand words you can send it to me.

If it's more than three thousand words, my first suggestion is that it's too long.

Cut out everything that doesn't need to be there.

Good luck. 😊

Hi Callmejayne, I have re-visited the story and made adjustments, word count is aroud 1400, found one error...easy enough to correct (used 12 rather than twelve), I am happy to send a copy in MS Word or a pdf copy if you prefer.

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Pay attention to what Jayne has to say. She knows what she's about.

Either I have some grit in my eye, or I'm going soft in my old age.

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