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Old Bag Of Bones
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Quote by JJPoland
Hello. My story needs some help. Can I ask anybody?


I looked at your page and it seems you have resolved this matter. You have since published several very good stories.

As for help editing. I will throw my hat in pot. I can help looking over stories to get them to a publishing point. I have helped several people get their stories published.

I will say this though. Editing a story for grammar or spelling or punctuation is not difficult. There are programs out there that will do that for you.

Editing a story for context and flow to make it a great story, takes a lot more time and sometimes requires rewrites of sections. It is very hard for someone else to keep a story the way you intended it if they have to change the flow or remove parts. You will have to decide which kind of editing you really want.

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories


For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

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Hi,

I've just about completed my first erotic story (actually my first published piece full stop) and I'd be really glad if someone took a look over mine. I'm pretty happy with it but as it's my first venture into erotic writing I'd appreciate it ;) Thanks.
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Quote by Starlust
Hi,

I've just about completed my first erotic story (actually my first published piece full stop) and I'd be really glad if someone took a look over mine. I'm pretty happy with it but as it's my first venture into erotic writing I'd appreciate it ;) Thanks.


Your story has not published yet. If you just sent it in, the mods will look it over and suggest minor changes for editing purposes. If they reject it and you don't understand why, you can PM and I will help. Be patient. It takes time to get a story right.

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories


For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories