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Poetry challenge: Use the last line first

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Eruption, climax, smoking guns, -
War's metaphors applied to love.
To invade, occupy, and seize,
I bring love, sobbing, to its knees.
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I bring love, sobbing, to its knees
When I kiss and fuck my sweet Venus;
I know full well her desires to please
With mouth, tongue, hands, and penis.
Lurker
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With mouth, tongue, hands, and penis
She feels my love shared just between us
So many zones so very erogenous
My need to fuck is so upon us
Lurker
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My need to fuck is so upon us
We flame and flame again;
We meld into the anonymous,
John Doe, you know, and Jane.
Lurker
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John Doe, you know, and Jane
A threesome you did share
Concerned it might cause pain
But no I did not care

Indeed I must admit
As you have learned by now
It aroused me quite a bit
And you should take a bow

My love, your life before
our time together here
is nothing to abhor
Indeed I hold it dear

For all that brought you joy
Experiments and more
Even treated like a toy
It's part of your alllure

So let me say it clear
Without a single doubt
It's you that I hold dear
And cannot live without
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And Cannot live without
Your words stab my heart
For you I get on my knees
And eat you like dessert
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And Cannot live without
You're words stab my heart
For you I get on my knees
And eat you like dessert
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"And eat you like dessert," he said.
She quivered on her chair,
And looking down discovered
That he was already there.
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That he was already there
in her heart
is what she always knew

He's always been there in the shadows
waiting
hoping
but never to realize
that she is in his heart

He passes her, like a ship in the night
Soul still empty
and waiting for a love
that would complete them both
Lurker
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That would complete them both
The missing link
That both of them had
That half part
Aching for that lost connection
Nothing that would fit
No where to belong
Everything different
Nothing to relate to
Nothing to rely on
But that deep down assurance
That one day
The stars align and
All falls in place
Purveyor of Sweetness
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all falls in place
in that moment you speak.
you words are gentle
and my heart races
at the very thought
they might be for me.
but alas
they are meant for the universe.
every one bait for the bit of sweetness
who will answer with a melody
to make your heart sing.
Lurker
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To make your heart sing
Is my fondest wish.
The universe
Is quite perverse,
In that it's everything.
Purveyor of Sweetness
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in that it's everything,
the universe breathes
with overwhelming thoughts
of love and longing.
satisfaction lurks at the fringes.
let's rest in moments
of peace and joy
knowing each moment is enough.
Purveyor of Sweetness
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Quote by GemGeekett
That he was already there
in her heart
is what she always knew

He's always been there in the shadows
waiting
hoping
but never to realize
that she is in his heart

He passes her, like a ship in the night
Soul still empty
and waiting for a love
that would complete them both


this comment is not a part of the thread (my poem above IS)

gemgeekett, your poem nearly made me weep...
Purveyor of Sweetness
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Quote by Oberon
As long as it is you doing it,
You can do anything.
My inhibitions packed their bags
And have
Gone with the wind.

As long as it is you doing it,
I could not be less aloof.
You're like a
Purring pussy
Cat on a hot tin roof.

As long as it is you doing it,
I dance to a new drummer.
I fell for you
Completely,
Suddenly last summer.

As long as it is you doing it,
I feel completely free.
As transparent to desire
As figures in
The glass menagerie.

As long as it is you doing it,
You set my heart on fire.
I would pay any fare
To ride
A streetcar named desire.






giggling and fanning languidly while i drink sweet tea
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Knowing that each moment is enough,
They devour
An hour
Or three with rough
And to then complete,
More hours of sweet.
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More hours of sweet
Twelve oclock
One o'clock
Two o'clock
Three
AM or PM
Wet and tangled in the sheets
Lurker
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Wet and tangled in the sheets
Supposed to take
Them off
The bed
First.......
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First...
I slowly moisten my lips
Sliding my hot tongue over them
Realizing that this gesture is getting him hard

With sensual and slow moves
I slide down on my knees
And crawl to him

Over his bare foot,
With my hands
Up to his crotch
I open his zipper of his jeans
Without braking our eye contact

Pulling his pants down
Just enough
That his cock can
Come to the sight

I open my mouth
And slide his pulsate cock
Down, into my throat
While his hands garb my head
Princess Blondie
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While his hands garb my head
I dig my nails into his back
He thrusts in deeper
Giving me no chance
The urge is to get and the need to high
I cum hard for him
He pounds harder, giving me more
I feel him deeper inside me with each thrust
All that I need is him, finding a new depth
†Jinxy Approved†

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All I need is him, finding a new depth
Archeologist of my body
Master of my heart, he takes away my breath
My soul he has discovered
My surface has been shed
The treasure is now his
Spread eagle on his bed
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Spread eagle on his bed
Wrists tightly tied above
Blindfold on her head
Ankle held by a glove

One leg free to wiggle
He hovers down below
From her mouth a giggle
Her face is all aglow
Princess Blondie
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Her face is all aglow
After a much needed self given orgasm
She smiles to herself, knowing no else knows her like herself
Her fingers roam her body, finding the need to go again
Plunging deep inside with one hand
The other pinching her nipples hard
Lifting her head back, and moaning out for all to hear
†Jinxy Approved†

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And moaning out for all to hear
His baby lets herself go
She knows he wants her surrender
Gives herself completely
A slave to his pleasure
Lurker
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A slave to his pleasure
But free to enjoy
The pleasures of others
who play with their toys
Active Ink Slinger
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Who plays with their toys
She doesn't have a clue
She is twisted, by his adoration
She doesnt have a clue
Lurker
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She doesn't have a clue
So she says to you
But I know better
She's a real go-getter
Lurker
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She's a real go-getter
This is true, for she has
The heart of jeremiahbull
For together in the forums they rule
One smart cookie is she
Because awesome Lushies they be
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Because awesome Lushies they be
There's one who stands out you'll see
With a sincere eyes and the cutest smile
And an endearing attitude...thats me!
Princess Blondie
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And an endearing attitude...thats me!
For I know all, can't you see?
I'm the one with all the knowledge,
So listen here, listen to me roar.
I'm the one who knows it all.
†Jinxy Approved†