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I finally posted my first story. Tell me what u think.
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Matriarch
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There are some comments made beneath your story JoJ.
The story is nicely descriptive and believable - a great first attempt, and a perfect story for a sequel.
I do find it hard to read stories with so many spelling mistakes though. Run it through a spellchecker prior to submitting next time please. Basic things like "jsut" can be excused once, but when the mistake occurs 3 or 4 times it looks careless - "taisted" as well.
I'm looking forward to seeing some more of your work
The story is nicely descriptive and believable - a great first attempt, and a perfect story for a sequel.
I do find it hard to read stories with so many spelling mistakes though. Run it through a spellchecker prior to submitting next time please. Basic things like "jsut" can be excused once, but when the mistake occurs 3 or 4 times it looks careless - "taisted" as well.
I'm looking forward to seeing some more of your work
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ok, thank you where can i get a spell check?
Matriarch
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Most word processing software has one built in. What program do you use? MS Word is the most common. If you are writing it in a flat file format like wordpad or notepad, you can put the text into an online spell checker, like this place http://www.spellcheck.net/
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Quote by jackoffjecht
ok, thank you where can i get a spell check?
Contact your nearest coven for an experienced witch to do your spell checking.d2IkjgQzmEal0Yb9