I'm interested in receiving critique's about my stories. Here is my most recent https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/-vince-and-abbys-first-threesome-that.aspx
You're more than welcome to post them here any suggestions that could help me might be able to help other writers on lush. I've been told by a MOd(Curvey) that my writing is really improving. Reading the stories of that were selected as RR's and those in the recent competition, multiple times.
As a reader, I do tend to over analyze a story and that might affect my writing, maybe that's my style. I stepped away from that with my "How far would I go for Love" series, the first is here https://www.lushstories.com/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx Based on votes, comments and views it's my most successful story here, yet I don't see what makes it better than my other stories.
If anyone would like a critique from em, i's be happy to provide them.
Thanks,
Pelwrath