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Pelwrath
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I'm interested in receiving critique's about my stories. Here is my most recent https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/-vince-and-abbys-first-threesome-that.aspx

You're more than welcome to post them here any suggestions that could help me might be able to help other writers on lush. I've been told by a MOd(Curvey) that my writing is really improving. Reading the stories of that were selected as RR's and those in the recent competition, multiple times.

As a reader, I do tend to over analyze a story and that might affect my writing, maybe that's my style. I stepped away from that with my "How far would I go for Love" series, the first is here https://www.lushstories.com/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx Based on votes, comments and views it's my most successful story here, yet I don't see what makes it better than my other stories.

If anyone would like a critique from em, i's be happy to provide them.

Thanks,

Pelwrath
"Illegitimis non carborundum." Vinger Joe Stllwell

What you learn in life is important; those you help learn are more.
Pelwrath
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I’ll add that in the newest story, I’m looking for suggestions in the comments about things the reader(s) would like to see. I’ve some general notes for it but nothing concrete. I may not use the entire idea but am looking forward to what the readers would be interested in.
"Illegitimis non carborundum." Vinger Joe Stllwell

What you learn in life is important; those you help learn are more.
Pelwrath
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Here is the link for the first in the Flame of Vengeance: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/-the-flame-of-vengeance-is-red-.aspx

The link for the beginning of my Desires Flame series and first erotic story I;ve written: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/novels/-orange-is-desires-flame-.aspx

one of my poems: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/-your-ladys-dreams-.aspx

The begining of How Far Would I go for Love series: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx
"Illegitimis non carborundum." Vinger Joe Stllwell

What you learn in life is important; those you help learn are more.
colin123
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Quote by Pelwrath
I'm interested in receiving critique's about my stories. Here is my most recent https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/-vince-and-abbys-first-threesome-that.aspx

You're more than welcome to post them here any suggestions that could help me might be able to help other writers on lush. I've been told by a MOd(Curvey) that my writing is really improving. Reading the stories of that were selected as RR's and those in the recent competition, multiple times.

As a reader, I do tend to over analyze a story and that might affect my writing, maybe that's my style. I stepped away from that with my "How far would I go for Love" series, the first is here https://www.lushstories.com/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx Based on votes, comments and views it's my most successful story here, yet I don't see what makes it better than my other stories.

If anyone would like a critique from em, i's be happy to provide them.

Thanks,

Pelwrath
Not read this but I will take a look.