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First stories: please have a look

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Hello all,

I just published my first two stories. Please have a look and let me know what you think of them, and if you have any ideas on how I can improve them.

The first one is a standalone story, the second one will probably become a series of stories.

Thanks, John
The standalone is decent for a first story. Simple, sexy, and had a beginning, middle, and end.

The New Couch Cover
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I really enjoyed The New Couch Cover. It brought back memories of something very similar that happened to me many years ago. Well done especially for a first story!