I just submitted my first story on here, it's been up for about 10 hours or so, and I'm really aching for some feedback.
I used to write a lot, but it's been very long, so I would love some constructive criticism or pointers. Even if it's to say that you found it boring and stopped reading a couple of sentences in, it would help, so I knew what to make different next time. A rating would help a lot too, so I know where I am quality-wise.
My story is a little specific (I think), the main theme being , but also containing spanking, reluctance and such. I really put my heart into it.
English is not my first language, so correcting any spelling errors is also a huge help.
Thanks in advance to anyone who wants to read on.
Unfortunately, because I'm new, I can't link it, since I haven't posted enough, but it's the only one on my profile, "A Good Girl's Desire", and it's very easy to find if you just click my name.
