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The Editor is Your Friend
Or If You Can't Take an Edit, Stay Out of the Publishing House
By
Stefani V. Kelsey
Editor-in-chief of Mojo Castle Press


Featured in
Xodtica Magazine March 2005
http://www.xodtica.com/


Back in the day, in order to see a book in print, you were forced to do it the old-fashioned way: submit to a major publishing house and use the rejection slips to dab your tears. Repeat the process until you either buried your dreams--and your manuscript--in the bottom of a trunk, or by God and by Golly...Hit the Big Time.

Now, the world is your publishing house. If Doubleday is foolish enough not to recognize your genius, you can hit small press, or POD, or ebook, or even do it yourself, whether by paying someone to do it for you, or truly making it your own. With so many options, finding the right fit is worth taking the time.

A huge factor in the decision-making process is that of the most feared facet of the publishing world: The Editor.

One misapprehension that the editor is out to hack, twist, trash, or otherwise fold, spindle, and mutilate your work. The true job of an editor is to take what you have and make it the best it can be, not to rewrite it in their own image and likeness. Spelling, grammar and sentence structure are standard, as is consistency.

You may get a manuscript back marked with enough red to illustrate the St. Valentine's Massacre, and still find not all that much is changed, as far as the true heart of your work: the story. An editor doesn't bake the cake, just decorates it.

Unfortunately, not all editors know their role. Some want to rewrite a story in a way they like, regardless of author's voice. Others fail to understand the author's world building, and end up literally destroying the carefully wrought storyline. Still more take on the role with a minimum of training and experience, and end up putting in more mistakes than they take out.

Usually because of a bad experience such as this, the author goes into the publishing world mistrusting the editor, and the relationship is doomed from the start. The trick is knowing the difference between a professional edit, and the evil alternative.

Editing can seem traumatic...you just handed over your baby, and when you get that book back, you feel like you've been attacked. Sentences you labored over have been hash-marked. The quaint turn of phrase you spent a good amount of time getting just so has been designated "too passive", and there is a detailed note attached asking you all sorts of inane questions you thought were made perfectly clear in line eighteen of page four.

What would bring an otherwise kind person to perform such brutality?

Oddly enough, they're doing it to help you.

If a publisher signs you, they think you have a good bit of writing that the public may enjoy. So their goal is to put out a book that people will want to spend money on. Now, no matter how good you and your crit group are, things will be missed. That's the editor's job. What seems perfectly clear and right to you after fifty readings may not be so to a reader during their first. A certain turn of phrase may read as offensive, or it may just not fit the image the house wants to project.

And of course, two words to strike fear in any wordsmith's heart: House Style.

Every publisher has their own style, terminology, and formatting methods. Which, in most cases, is nothing like yours.

But the end result is not intended to send you into a fit of weeping and bosom-rending, but merely to create a marketable product.

If it's not about the money, or you think your misspellings are creative, and should be left in for emphasis, or you truly fear the evil editor, don't go to a publisher.

Insane advice? No, self-preservation.

You're better off going to a vanity press, or simply doing it yourself because all it will result in is bad blood between you and the publisher. If you sign their contract, you are in essence agreeing to do it their way. If you don't like their way, don't sign the contract.

And yes, an ebook publisher is a real publisher. And a contract is a contract.

Going to an ebook publisher is not a "last resort." It also does not mean you get the right to do or say whatever you like. An epublisher commands the same respect as any other.

- If Doubleday signed you, would you argue with and/or insult the editor?
- Would you ask the publisher after they spent hours editing and putting your book up for sale to dissolve your contract because you want to go to another publisher?
- More important, would they?

Straight up answer is no, on all counts. You wouldn't do it, and they wouldn't take it. So keep that in mind when you make your decision.

© 2010 Stefani V. Kelsey
Posted with Permission
Morgan Hawke
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Purveyor of fine Smut.
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DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein


I am SO going to call in some favours at this point in order to obtain some totally gratuitous ego enhancing posts from people I edit for here at Lush to slavishly tell you how much that article touches them because I have proof-read, critiqued, and edited their writing, which they have always appeciated at some point.

Or not. But that is great to read, thank you.

The Editor is Your Friend
Or If You Can't Take an Edit, Stay Out of the Publishing House


I had to quote that, it just rings so true.
Quote by gypsymoth
I am SO going to call in some favours at this point in order to obtain some totally gratuitous ego enhancing posts from people I edit for here at Lush to slavishly tell you how much that article touches them because I have proof-read, critiqued, and edited their writing, which they have always appeciated at some point. Or not. But that is great to read, thank you.


You're welcome!
-- A really good editor is one who can tell what you Meant to write even if it didn't come out that way. Stef is a genius at doing that for me.
Morgan Hawke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Purveyor of fine Smut.
Morgan Hawke's DarkErotica ~ My Website
DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein
Editors are awesome. I've learned something from every one of them, and the most brutal among my editors have been the best.

And can I just say, it would be wonderful for my sanity if every house in the universe adopted the same house style. It'll never happen, but...a girl can dream. lol (About two weeks ago, I was juggling four sets of edits, all from different publishers, and it was actually funny how many things one house would do one way and another would do completely differently. It was either funny or I was going insane. One of the two.)
Lori
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Sadly, i get into a lot of pretty intense arguments with my editor... and i self edit! i can only imagine what it would be like for someone poor soul to take over the job. In all seriousness, yeah, i can be stubborn - one of the reasons i've never seriously looked into writing for money is that very reason - i don't tend to play well with others when it comes to writing - that said, i've never sat down and really given it a serious try before - i am beginning to rethink that on some levels - it would be an interesting experiment - i mean, i've never even used a beta - yeah, i know, i know, don't lecture me already smile part of the issue, admittedly, is i am kind of insecure about my writing and i'm not sure i take 'constructive' criticism well - unless it's given out by a paddle wielding woman wearing leather... i wonder if that could be arranged!

Looking for: Domme/editor. Must be willing to tie me down and punish me for grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and aimless plots. Apply in person.

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Looking for: Domme/editor. Must be willing to tie me down and punish me for grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and aimless plots. Apply in person.



You wouldn't be the type who would put in lots of errors just so you could get punished, would you?

Just thought I'd ask...

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Quote by GallagherWitt
Editors are awesome. I've learned something from every one of them, and the most brutal among my editors have been the best.


Here! here!

Quote by GallagherWitt
And can I just say, it would be wonderful for my sanity if every house in the universe adopted the same house style. It'll never happen, but...a girl can dream. lol (About two weeks ago, I was juggling four sets of edits, all from different publishers, and it was actually funny how many things one house would do one way and another would do completely differently. It was either funny or I was going insane. One of the two.)


I have 4 publishers and NONE Agree with Any of the others!
Morgan Hawke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Purveyor of fine Smut.
Morgan Hawke's DarkErotica ~ My Website
DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein
Quote by sprite
Looking for: Domme/editor. Must be willing to tie me down and punish me for grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and aimless plots. Apply in person.


I HAVE ONE! Stef my editor at Mojo Castle will and HAS worn leather and wielded a paddle just for me. Of course, this was at a convention, but hey...! It still counts!

I have learned far more from my editors than I have from any book or tutorial. Seriously. The only reason I'm as good a writer as I am is because of my editors.
Morgan Hawke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Purveyor of fine Smut.
Morgan Hawke's DarkErotica ~ My Website
DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein
Quote by MorganHawke
Quote by GallagherWitt
Editors are awesome. I've learned something from every one of them, and the most brutal among my editors have been the best.


Here! here!

Quote by GallagherWitt
And can I just say, it would be wonderful for my sanity if every house in the universe adopted the same house style. It'll never happen, but...a girl can dream. lol (About two weeks ago, I was juggling four sets of edits, all from different publishers, and it was actually funny how many things one house would do one way and another would do completely differently. It was either funny or I was going insane. One of the two.)


I have 4 publishers and NONE Agree with Any of the others!


Fun, isn't it? LOL I try to be on the ball and tune each manuscript to the house style *before* I submit it so I don't waste their time or mine, but invariably, there ends up being some tweakage. Can't win for losing, dammit. lol
Lori
L. A. Witt (gay male erotic romance)
Lauren Gallagher (heterosexual erotic romance)
Twitter: GallagherWitt
My Website * My Blog * Marginally Unhinged (my webcomic)

"Service with a Smirk, that's you." - Morgan Hawke
Quote by GallagherWitt
Fun, isn't it? LOL I try to be on the ball and tune each manuscript to the house style *before* I submit it so I don't waste their time or mine, but invariably, there ends up being some tweakage. Can't win for losing, dammit. lol


Just goes to show that Editors are just as different from each other as authors.
Morgan Hawke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Purveyor of fine Smut.
Morgan Hawke's DarkErotica ~ My Website
DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein
Quote by MorganHawke
Quote by GallagherWitt
Fun, isn't it? LOL I try to be on the ball and tune each manuscript to the house style *before* I submit it so I don't waste their time or mine, but invariably, there ends up being some tweakage. Can't win for losing, dammit. lol


Just goes to show that Editors are just as different from each other as authors.


Amen to that. I have one who likes to put commas in all over the place, and another who's a commacidal maniac. Gotta love 'em. biggrin
Lori
L. A. Witt (gay male erotic romance)
Lauren Gallagher (heterosexual erotic romance)
Twitter: GallagherWitt
My Website * My Blog * Marginally Unhinged (my webcomic)

"Service with a Smirk, that's you." - Morgan Hawke
Quote by GallagherWitt
I have one who likes to put commas in all over the place, and another who's a commacidal maniac. Gotta love 'em. biggrin


NONE of my publishers agree on commas, so I let them put them or pull them as they like.

On the other hand, I actually had to explain to one that an em-dash IS the proper punctuation for a comment that's been cut off in the middle and continues elsewhere - NOT an ellipsis. An ellipses is for Missing, Skipped or Omitted words. If the words are cut off by an action in the middle, they are NOT Missing, Skipped or Omitted.

"What the hell are you--?"
He tenderly bit down on her nipple.
She gasped. "--Doing to me?"
Morgan Hawke
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Purveyor of fine Smut.
Morgan Hawke's DarkErotica ~ My Website
DarkErotica Blog ~ My Writers' blog

"If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."
Albert Einstein