Just looking for a little help properly depicting trans in a story I am writing

7 Apr 2020

I not really sure how the forums or groups work, but any feedback would be appreciated so to help the story I am writing right now. At the request of reader on here who had a fantasy about a shy middle age man being attracted to a beautiful trans and what would follow, i started writing a story to help him imagine what could happen. The story how has ten chapters. I hope I am depicting things appropriately. My stories usually try to deal this thoughts, feeling, and emotions of the characters which I tried to bring out in the story.

I am not trying to up my readership, but if any of you would be willing to glance over what is written so far and give me pointers. About what I might be depicting wrong, or in anyway offensive (which I surely do not mean at all), or ideas about how to take the story forward, I would really appreciate it. I do have a basic outline for the tale, but if their is something that I might be leaving out which should be considered, I would appreciate it.

The story is call Tim and Abbie written by me, Cammi.

Thanks for any input which is offered. And happy reading to all on here.

Cammi

27 Apr 2020

How is the story going?

27 Apr 2020

11 chapters have been finished right now. I am semi putting it on hold while I try to finish the main story I have been writing on and on over - 130 chapters now/almost 2 years. It only has about 10 more, so would like to get it finished so can concentrate on the Tim and Abbie one. Who is 'contributing' to my writing is whose fantasy is to be with a trans. Which is why I am trying to make sure I tell the story from that point of few, the worries etc to getting into something like this the first time after living a very straight and narrow life in the past. But also from the trans point of few, desires, wants, own insecurities, etc. Which is where I am not sure if I am depicting it right.

I don't want to offend anyone with the story, I would like it to be an accurate portrayal.

Thanks for asking.

30 May 2020

My story "First time with a shemale" may help, based on a true experience.

31 May 2020

Thanks for the suggestion - I just read the story and it helps some.

20 May 2022

Cammi, I have been getting more involved with Lush. Reading stories and looking thru the Forum Sections.

I just found this just this morning.

I am always looking at the Trans section and your series on Tim and Abbie has been a Wonderful Story.

Thanks for writing and Please keep the Great stories coming. Gene