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Would any of the ladies here read/enjoy a girl-on-girl story written by a guy?

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Hello everyone! I am new to the forum. Looks like a lot of fun. I have written some stories elsewhere, and just having some fun with this. Thought I'd experiement with a story about two women.

I know some of the basics, like a great build-up and an intimate/romantic aspect. I know a few other things, but am still learning. It seems words might matter. I thought clitoris sometimes sounds better than clit. Pussy sounds fine to me, but there's probably a few that hate it. I don't like the word moisture, and am still looking for a good synonym.

You can see I am a rookie, so please go easy on me, girls!

The story is about two cheerleaders in a fictitious pro football league. Alessandra is a first year cheerleader and recent arrival from Colombia. She has never thought about girls before, but has an instense crush on Jill.

Cheerleader veteran Jill helped Alessandra when she joined the squad. Jill has been a sort of mentor.

The conflict experienced by Alessandra is that she is too shy to express herself to Jill. Time is also running out because Jill and her boyfriend are soon moving to Europe. It's now or never for Alessandra!

I wrote the first chapter. It's under the category Bisexual. I just submitted it and waiting for approval.

BTW, character Jill is the blonde in my avatar.


PS. Not sure if this type of question goes here, but looks like a good category. I will have to check the other threads too.


Thanks for any input.
sprite
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if it's well written, i don't see why not. lot of good writers here able to write stories in any category and make it believable. smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
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Quote by sprite
if it's well written, i don't see why not. lot of good writers here able to write stories in any category and make it believable. smile




Thanks, Sprite. Can I post a teaser here?
sprite
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Thanks, Sprite. Can I post a teaser here?


we prefer if you simply submit the finished story. once you do that, you can put up a little blurb in the promotions thread. smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
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we prefer if you simply submit the finished story. once you do that, you can put up a little blurb in the promotions thread. smile



O.K. gotchya. I already submitted, but will just check back later. Thanks again.
ChandlerAja2
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I would not object in the least.

If you can tell the story and make it sound plausible. I am sure there are men out there that can think just like a woman and it would hard to tell the gender of the writer.

Only one way to know is to write it and measure the member's response.
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Quote by ChandlerAja2

Only one way to know is to write it and measure the member's response.



I can't argue with that, Chandler. The first chapter is written and posted in Bisexual Stories.
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It was sort of disappointing how there was no feedback for the third chapter. :-( I want to work on a much longer story, but would like just a little feedback.

I really want to do this mix of subplots in this longer story (unrelated to Alessandra's Girl Crush). I don't know if they'd be described as juxtaposed, but it would be a real mixture. For example, the fictional setting resembles the old west, but with some erotic elements. The family is a mother, father, son, and daughter. The daughter turns adult and has sexual feelings for an Indian woman her same age (late teens). I would add some mild eroticism.
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Quote by MikeGarrison
It was sort of disappointing how there was no feedback for the third chapter. :-( I want to work on a much longer story, but would like just a little feedback.




Have you done anything to promote it? I usually put a link to my latest in my sig (haven't published anything new on here in a while so I currently have an old favorite there) and start a thread in Self-Promotion and Marketing. If it's a series, you can add a new post to the thread for each chapter. There's also the old "blast to your friends" but some friends respond better to that tactic than others so use it judiciously.

As for your original question, I've written some lesbian stories and received positive comments from women so, yeah, women will read lesbian stories by men.
calx86
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Sure, I'll check it out ;).

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Have you done anything to promote it? I usually put a link to my latest in my sig (haven't published anything new on here in a while so I currently have an old favorite there) and start a thread in Self-Promotion and Marketing. If it's a series, you can add a new post to the thread for each chapter. There's also the old "blast to your friends" but some friends respond better to that tactic than others so use it judiciously.

As for your original question, I've written some lesbian stories and received positive comments from women so, yeah, women will read lesbian stories by men.


I'm a bit of a newbie here . What's a sig?
sprite
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Sure, I'll check it out ;).



I'm a bit of a newbie here . What's a sig?


signature - it's the stuff at the bottom of everyone's post that is static. a lot of writers use it to advertise the stories they have published here. smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
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signature - it's the stuff at the bottom of everyone's post that is static. a lot of writers use it to advertise the stories they have published here. smile


What she said. Calling it a "sig" is old school Internet. I've been around a while.
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signature - it's the stuff at the bottom of everyone's post that is static. a lot of writers use it to advertise the stories they have published here. smile


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What she said. Calling it a "sig" is old school Internet. I've been around a while.


Oh okay. Awesome. Thanks heart.
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Oh okay. Awesome. Thanks heart.


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You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
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Yes.
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Sure, if a guy can write it?

But, I haven't read anything Lesbian, written by any guys at Lush,
that ist very good in really knowing the intricacy und differences how girls make love to each other.
Not sure how any guy would know about the little things between 2 girls?
But that just my thought und experiences here with stories und cybersex...

Write it und I surely check it out.
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I would imagine so. Like any story, though, "it just depends".
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Thanks so much heart <3 <3
SylviaK
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Sure, although it may be perceived as a guy's fantasy about ladyloving.
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Nafisa
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Yes. Sure we do. Most of us joined lush after reading stories here.

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ErinDcup34
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Absolutely! Why not? I'm curious to know what guys think when two girls are together. All they have is visual and audible clues.. I've always wondered what it feels like in a guy when he's in me or getting a bj - all I have are his eyes and his smile the obvious physical responses.... Maybe "ll write a short story pretending I'm a guy getting a blowjob .... I wonder how it will be received....
Koso1995
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Yes, I like to read those stories irrespective of the writer's gender. It is a great thing if he can illustrate the feeling of women.