Hi,
I wrote My time as a Sugar Babe and am now writing part two. Has anyone got any tips or links on how to describe a long sex scene without just re hashing the same words? any tips or assistance would be great.
I'm just getting back into writing erotica and seem to have hit a brick wall.
Thanks
Kitten
Dialogue! I run into that problem from time to time and dialogue really opens things up. Like WW said, even two lines can give the reader a break fromm sameness.
You can also have someone break a lamp or fall off the bed or something else unexpected. Throws some action in, breaks up the scene, and their reaction (too revved up to give a shit, or laughing and geting right back to the action) tell us a lot about the characters and their relationship.
You can also try a phone ringing or a dog walking in and watching you.
Or you could use Grammarly to help edit. It makes suggestions when it sees the same words used too many times.
Thats a a good idea, I have Grammarly but I'm waiting till they have a half price special to resubscribe, thank you Jim.
