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I suppose this is the correct place to ask this. It has to do with the ongoing My Boulevard Girfriend series (which has a chapter pending right now). Basically, it's about two students who are losing their virginity to each other and doing it in steps, with the girl taking the lead in this. The only place they really have any privacy for this is in a room in the basement of her building. She wants to try out a spanking scene (probably based on a magazine she has seen) in which she plays the role of a stern teacher and he is a wayward student. However, they want some plausible setting that could stand-in for a classroom although it doesn't necessarily have to be one.

So where would they go? They can't likely use their own schools after hours. She lives, I think, only with her mother and sister, so it is possible they might have use of the apartment if and when both are out. They can't use his apartment because he lives with a larger family and somebody is almost always there.

It's been a couple of days and nobody has replied so I'll give you my thoughts.

It seems you've created yourself an insoluble problem in your imaginery landscape, so either you'll have to adjust that landscape or ...

What I would do is to write it as a spoken scene. She doesn't actually spank him, she narrates the idea of spanking him and then both can respond to the arousal that ensues. This also sets up the possibility of her spanking him in a subsequent chapter when they find a suitable locale.

So, for what it's worth that would be my solution.

Good luck.

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It's been a couple of days and nobody has replied so I'll give you my thoughts.

It seems you've created yourself an insoluble problem in your imaginery landscape, so either you'll have to adjust that landscape or ...

What I would do is to write it as a spoken scene. She doesn't actually spank him, she narrates the idea of spanking him and then both can respond to the arousal that ensues. This also sets up the possibility of her spanking him in a subsequent chapter when they find a suitable locale.

So, for what it's worth that would be my solution.

Good luck.

Thank you. What I've been thinking is that there must be times when both her sister and her mother would be out, and they could use her apartment. They haven't done that before because they haven't needed to. It would be easy enough to fictionally work it out - her sister goes to college (Lehman, I believe I wrote) and her mother works.

One possibility is that they find that someone - the landlord or another tenant - has stored some equipment in the basement, including (say) a whiteboard and an ink stained desk or table: that and (say) the fact that both have their school uniforms. Knowing that this is about students using their imaginations as a lead in to losing their virginity, it shouldn't take much of their imaginations to unleash that spanking scene. Just a thought ... 😉

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One possibility is that they find that someone - the landlord or another tenant - has stored some equipment in the basement, including (say) a whiteboard and an ink stained desk or table: that and (say) the fact that both have their school uniforms. Knowing that this is about students using their imaginations as a lead in to losing their virginity, it shouldn't take much of their imaginations to unleash that spanking scene. Just a thought ... 😉

Thanks, I thought about a scenario like that, but I think I'm going with the apartment idea. They haven't used the apartment before because they haven't needed to. They only need a single afternoon to pull it off. What I think is going to start bothering them soon is that they have nowhere to go yet to spend a whole night together.