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In a recent conversation with a friend, we talked about the Hugh Hefner story. She was rather appalled at the idea of a 60 year age gap between the runaway bride and HH.

It gave me an idea:

A young wife or college student feels pretty much the same way about the story, however, shortly after she meets a much older man (she 25 he 75) and immediately there is a spark or something. She tries to fight it but is unable to.

I have most of the idea formed I'm just not sure how to get the action started.

Perhaps he is a mall walker or maybe they meet at church?

Any ideas or suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks
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In a recent conversation with a friend, we talked about the Hugh Hefner story. She was rather appalled at the idea of a 60 year age gap between the runaway bride and HH.

It gave me an idea:

A young wife or college student feels pretty much the same way about the story, however, shortly after she meets a much older man (she 25 he 75) and immediately there is a spark or something. She tries to fight it but is unable to.

I have most of the idea formed I'm just not sure how to get the action started.

Perhaps he is a mall walker or maybe they meet at church?

Any ideas or suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks


I'd suggest, he's a genetically modified human. Place the story in the year 2085 (the dude hasn't even been born yet)...but at 75 he looks like Ryan Reynolds does now. Then it will work just fine.
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You are forgetting the critical attractor... your 75 yr old needs to be filthy, ostentatiously, ridiculously RICH. That means he's probably not a 'mall walker'.

You could have the young girl coming into contact with him because she is a caterer on his yacht or a healthcare worker/nurse that is bringing him a suitcase of viagra or tending to him because he's 'accidentally' taken too much.

To keep it real, make sure you can capture the lustful gleam in her eye when she realizes he has a heart condition and no immediate heirs.

Also have her tell him that she would find it extra kinky if she wears a blindfold during the 'encounter'. And make sure she has ingested her fair share of champagne and hallucinogens before they get down and dirty. That's what most girls would do if they were looking to ride a 75 year old Time Machine.

This actually could be a fun story! Good luck!
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Hey Rignon...I think if you follow Ashleigh Doll's advice you'll do just fine...and don't take Jeff too seriously, he's just a trouble maker...

I would add one minor detail to Doll's list though...I would most definitely make it so that she finds out that he's actually her long, lost grandfather so this way you can post the story in the " " category...

You'll definitely pick up more views/votes that way...

You could throw some interesting twists and turns into the story...as long as you "keep it real" as Doll points out...perhaps she considers leaving him for a bit after getting an e-mail that a distant relative in Nigeria had an accident and left her $25,000,000.00 only to find out later it was an internet hoax after she sent her whole life savings to Nigeria to cover postage to ship the money...

You know, everyday stuff like that...just "keep it real"...

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Hey Rignon...I think if you follow Ashleigh Doll's advice you'll do just fine...and don't take Jeff too seriously, he's just a trouble maker...

You know, everyday stuff like that...just "keep it real"...


Alan, your comment just offended me.
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Alan, your comment just offended me.


Is that your offended look? Alright, let's keep Jeff happy...

Rignon...when you write up your story about the young women who falls for her long-lost rich grandfather, make sure you throw in a group of cross-dressing pygmies for a group sex scene...

Feel better Jeff???

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See...it did not take much to soothe the savage beast.
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Thanks for the replies. Haven't decided which direction to go with yet, but hopefully I can have something soon.

If anyone else has any ideas, I'd like to hear them as well.

Thanks
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I wasn't 75, but I met my 24 year old fling when she worked at the bank I used on a daily basis. Got to know eachother over time, and it led to some mindblowing sex. I didn't have my personal accounts there, but in the story it could give her some inside information.
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as i am a retired 62 year old and very active in the community and area rodeos I have had the honor and i must say privileged of judging some miss teen pageants it is amazing what happen back stage. But i must add mostly with the mothers of the teens.....just a thought for your story
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as i am a retired 62 year old and very active in the community and area rodeos I have had the honor and i must say privileged of judging some miss teen pageants it is amazing what happen back stage. But i must add mostly with the mothers of the teens.....just a thought for your story
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as i am a retired 62 year old and very active in the community and area rodeos I have had the honor and i must say privileged of judging some miss teen pageants it is amazing what happen back stage. But i must add mostly with the mothers of the teens.....just a thought for your story
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sorry for the triple post