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I think you should throw a Regina in there every once in a while. Say her skin was like spun gold sparkling in the sunlight and tasted of honey. She was the type of chocolate you could never get enough off, creamy and sweet. Her juices played on my tongue and I had the desperate need to wrap myself in her dark body. Regina was water and I was fully immersed...

Uhm, sorry. I got a little carried away there. I'm just saying...



Careful now ... BUBBA's gonna get aroused and this ain't no story!!
All of my characters are named after Sprite's former lovers. That's why I use Buz a lot. Don't tell anyone.
I have made a long list of names I like and I choose names from it that fit my characters, but sometimes I start a story, or add a character in the middle, and a correct name just comes along with the character. I also have a list of the names I've used and seldom repeat one. I like to use unusual names if they fit. I often reject a name if it reminds me of someone I've known.
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All of my characters are named after Sprite's former lovers. That's why I use Buz a lot. Don't tell anyone.


You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

I have used the names of people I have known many times. They would have done everything in character with what I have written about them so I would not be demeaning them. Some may even have done the things I have written about with me.
Generally I would not use names of people I was currently involved with though.
So basically, it's not just me then smile That is a relief.
I do not think very hard about character's names, so they all are something like Dave, Doug, Jane or Liz. I also tend to opt for shorter names and easy to spell names!
Sometimes I think about it, sometimes not. I don't believe most readers take the time to discover what a character's name means.
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I don't know if this is just me so I thought I'd ask....

Does anyone else think long and hard about the names for their characters? I read quite a few stories and if the names aren't right, it really detracts from the story. One story I remember started out brilliantly until I found out their names were ... Derren and Dee-dee. I couldn't continue with it, I was annoyed with myself more than anything else. Another bugbear of mine is if the character has a specific nationality (e.g Swedish) and then they don't actually have a Swedish name. Yeah, I know pretty anal of me.

I try and give characters names that are distinct and separate, no alliteration allowed. I'd be interested to know the thoughts of others on this? I'd like to think I'm not developing some kind of OCD complex over it smile


to make my characters more real I pattern them after real people that I've know in my long & sordid life. then I use either their name or a close variation. it seems to work OK for me.
I try to use common names unless I'm playing with a supernatural character. I might go more exotic if the character is a vampire or a werewolf.

One of my writing pet peeves is when a bunch of characters share the same first letter of their first name. If you have a Roger, Robert, and Richard at the three main characters in your story, there's no way I'll keep them straight in my head as I read.

Bridges of Madison County did this to me. I was constantly trying to remember which was the husband and which was the lover.
The names are very important to me and I think long and hard about it before I start writing. I always try to come up with something a little different or something that may convey their personality a little. For example, I chose Adelaide for a more complex character and Christine for an airhead character. D'arcy for an artistic character and Olymipa for a mysterious character. You can say a lot about your characters just with the name. It's especially important in short stories.
Bugs, Sarge, Doreen, Wilbur, and Petey are the character names from a story I particularly enjoyed writing. Doreen was the Waffle House waitress.

An excerpt...

Having already shot his load, the sergeant found himself impatiently hoping that Bugs would hurry and finish so they could leave. He kept eyeing them from his sitting position, annoyed the younger Bugs hadn’t shown any signs of slowing down.

Five minutes later, Sarge was wondering if Bugs endless pounding of Doreen from the rear would ever end. Just then he heard the tone of Bugs’s grunts change. Sarge turned toward them.

Bugs suddenly went tight, his muscles tensed. “Ooh! Oh! Oh, fuck!”

“Give it to me Bugs!” Doreen realized that Bugs was cumming. “Come to mama!”

Finally, Bugs had shot his load. He exploded into Doreen’s soaked twat and slowed his pace down until he stopped. Doreen collapsed on her face. She lay prostate on the bed. Her plump pussy lips creamy and splayed apart.

“Oh my god!” she forced out while catching her breath. “I haven’t been fucked like that in years.”

Bugs dropped to bed next to her. “Damn, I need another beer and could use a few donuts to get my strength back.”

“Goddamn, Bugs,” bellowed the sergeant, “you just barely got through fuckin’ and you want donuts?”

“Yeah, I sure could use a box.” Bugs wiped the sweat off his face. “You wanna go over to Burton’s Corner and buy some Krispy Kreme’s from the cheerleaders?”
Just call them Barbie or Margot!!
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I don't know if this is just me so I thought I'd ask....

Does anyone else think long and hard about the names for their characters? I read quite a few stories and if the names aren't right, it really detracts from the story. One story I remember started out brilliantly until I found out their names were ... Derren and Dee-dee. I couldn't continue with it, I was annoyed with myself more than anything else. Another bugbear of mine is if the character has a specific nationality (e.g Swedish) and then they don't actually have a Swedish name. Yeah, I know pretty anal of me.

I try and give characters names that are distinct and separate, no alliteration allowed. I'd be interested to know the thoughts of others on this? I'd like to think I'm not developing some kind of OCD complex over it smile




I am the same. I love research, whether it be for a historical story and finding out about names that were used in historical time periods, or if it's stories set in different countries. Names for me can 'make or break' characters. I always write a story with a fair idea of the names I'm going to use and personality traits first. It makes the process easier. You don't have to like the names, everyone has their favourite names, as well as names they dislike for whatever reasons, but names are important for the readers, as well as the writer's perception of the characters.
I try to match the names of the characters to the story. I think it makes for a much better and sexy read.
It matters to me. I need to get into what I'm writing and that means creating the right character, which comes from the name.

In my latest story (my only one on here) I changed the title character's name just before publication, as she is a portrait of a real person with an identical relationship to me as that between the two characters and I'm irrationally paranoid about the ridiculously low chance of people identifying themselves and me. It took me ages to find an appropriate name, and even when I settled on Aoife I'm still not used to it.

It probably doesn't matter much to my readers at the time of reading, but without the right name I wouldn't be into my story and it wouldn't have anything like the same heat across all that distance.

My first Lush Story Aoife A Recommended Read
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I don't know if this is just me so I thought I'd ask....

Does anyone else think long and hard about the names for their characters? I read quite a few stories and if the names aren't right, it really detracts from the story. One story I remember started out brilliantly until I found out their names were ... Derren and Dee-dee. I couldn't continue with it, I was annoyed with myself more than anything else. Another bugbear of mine is if the character has a specific nationality (e.g Swedish) and then they don't actually have a Swedish name. Yeah, I know pretty anal of me.

I try and give characters names that are distinct and separate, no alliteration allowed. I'd be interested to know the thoughts of others on this? I'd like to think I'm not developing some kind of OCD complex over it smile



giving the story a title & naming the characters are both harder than writing the story.