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A little note about multi-part stories.

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Kiera, there are always guidelines that we like to see adhered to. Does that mean if the word count does not meet said guideline we reject it? By all means, no. If the story is good enough to stand alone, be it part of a multi-part series (what this thread is about) or a single story, then we can waive the guideline and publish the story. When it gets too far outside the guidelines, that's when we suggest the author make corrections.

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I was not worried about that tbh.

Mine got published.

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Is there a technical reason for the 10,000 word maximum? I realize there has to be an upper limit, but why only 10k?

I attempted to submit the first "chapter" of a three part story, but it got returned because it was 13k words. I wasn't aware of this word limit, especially since I've had stories published here previously that were over 10k words without it being an issue. The solution suggesting that I break it into smaller parts doesn't really work for me. The whole piece was constructed with an intentional structure. If I break it into two parts, the first part will be all mounting action with no climax. This will result in justifiably lower ratings and a consequent loss of readers both for this first part and subsequent parts. Meanwhile, the second part will be all climax, which will be just as unsatisfying for the reader. Both parts will be out of balance and the quality of the story will be lessened, giving readers a poorer experience as a result.

Many of the comments in this thread declare personal preference for shorter, longer, or mediumer length stories. There are people who never read long stories, but at the same time there are people who only want to read long stories. The limits shouldn't be evaluated in terms of subjective preferences. In light of this, the 10k limit feels somewhat arbitrary in that it doesn't function to serve the author or the reader, but rather a seemingly abstract guideline.
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Is there a technical reason for the 10,000 word maximum? I realize there has to be an upper limit, but why only 10k?

I attempted to submit the first "chapter" of a three part story, but it got returned because it was 13k words. I wasn't aware of this word limit, especially since I've had stories published here previously that were over 10k words without it being an issue. The solution suggesting that I break it into smaller parts doesn't really work for me. The whole piece was constructed with an intentional structure. If I break it into two parts, the first part will be all mounting action with no climax. This will result in justifiably lower ratings and a consequent loss of readers both for this first part and subsequent parts. Meanwhile, the second part will be all climax, which will be just as unsatisfying for the reader. Both parts will be out of balance and the quality of the story will be lessened, giving readers a poorer experience as a result.

Many of the comments in this thread declare personal preference for shorter, longer, or mediumer length stories. There are people who never read long stories, but at the same time there are people who only want to read long stories. The limits shouldn't be evaluated in terms of subjective preferences. In light of this, the 10k limit feels somewhat arbitrary in that it doesn't function to serve the author or the reader, but rather a seemingly abstract guideline.


Why are you concerned about lower reader figures. Isn't it better to know that the readers who stay to the end are really enjoying your work and not just reading because of the sex?
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I think it less about words than it is about the story itself. Tell it well, and your readers will stay with you. Leave a single dead spot, a place where the reader's mind can wander, and you've lost them.

Make sure each chapter is complete. Make sure it has a point. If you digress, you waste your readers time. You must stay on point. Stay focused on the overall arc and don't allow yourself to drift away. At the end, complete the part you set out to write, but leave them just enough questions they they want to return. That is how you keep readers engaged and interested.

If you do all of that well, word count means very little over all. Your series will succeed. Fail at any point, and you are done.
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Why are you concerned about lower reader figures. Isn't it better to know that the readers who stay to the end are really enjoying your work and not just reading because of the sex?


I'm concerned because I want as many people as possible to read what I write (I know, I'm weird like that). There's no chance they'll enjoy it if they don't read it! I don't want a potential reader to give my story a skip because it has an artificially low rating (or because it's visibility is compromised). My point being that readers are less likely to enjoy my work and stay to the end if it's artificially broken up in spots that serve an arbitrary word limit rather than the flow of the story.
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Quote by DirtyMindedMom
Is there a technical reason for the 10,000 word maximum? I realize there has to be an upper limit, but why only 10k?


Because every story submission is read by a moderator prior to approval. 10k words is a long story, and we have to draw the line somewhere.

It is rare that someone writes a story over 10k words where there is no suitable point in the narrative to break it into a second section or chapter.
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Quote by DirtyMindedMom
Is there a technical reason for the 10,000 word maximum? I realize there has to be an upper limit, but why only 10k?


In addition to what Liz said, this is a place for people to post short stories, mainly. At 10000, it's already stopped being short, hasn't it?
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Because every story submission is read by a moderator prior to approval. 10k words is a long story, and we have to draw the line somewhere.

It is rare that someone writes a story over 10k words where there is no suitable point in the narrative to break it into a second section or chapter.


Ah, okay - this is what I suspected. It's for the convenience of the moderators, not for the benefit of the readers or authors. Thanks for acknowledging that. ;)
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In addition to what Liz said, this is a place for people to post short stories, mainly. At 10000, it's already stopped being short, hasn't it?


Perhaps in your opinion. But, technically, no.

From https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Short_story

Determining what exactly separates a short story from longer fictional formats is problematic. A classic definition of a short story is that one should be able to read it in one sitting, a point most notably made in Edgar Allan Poe's essay "Thomas Le Moineau (Le Moile)" (1846). Interpreting this standard nowadays is problematic, since the expected length of "one sitting" may now be briefer than it was in Poe's era. Other definitions place the maximum word count of the short story at anywhere from 1,000 to 4,000. In contemporary usage, the term short story most often refers to a work of fiction no shorter than 1,000 and no longer than 20,000 words. Stories of fewer than 1,000 words are sometimes referred to as "short short stories", or "flash fiction."
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Ah, okay - this is what I suspected. It's for the convenience of the moderators, not for the benefit of the readers or authors. Thanks for acknowledging that. ;)


This kind of sounds like you're implying that the convenience of the talented volunteers who help keep this site running and are the only reason that any stories get posted (and who are also readers and authors) is not an important consideration. I hope I'm reading you wrong.

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A classic definition of a short story is that one should be able to read it in one sitting... In contemporary usage, the term short story most often refers to a work of fiction no shorter than 1,000 and no longer than 20,000 words.


Your story would have to be pretty bloody excellent and pretty bloody compelling for me to read 20000 words of it in one sitting. While, of course, one could have a never-ending debate about how long a short story is, I can personally say that most of the best ones I've ever read have had fewer than 5000 words.
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Quote by DirtyMindedMom


Perhaps in your opinion. But, technically, no.

From https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Short_story

Determining what exactly separates a short story from longer fictional formats is problematic. A classic definition of a short story is that one should be able to read it in one sitting, a point most notably made in Edgar Allan Poe's essay "Thomas Le Moineau (Le Moile)" (1846). Interpreting this standard nowadays is problematic, since the expected length of "one sitting" may now be briefer than it was in Poe's era. Other definitions place the maximum word count of the short story at anywhere from 1,000 to 4,000. In contemporary usage, the term short story most often refers to a work of fiction no shorter than 1,000 and no longer than 20,000 words. Stories of fewer than 1,000 words are sometimes referred to as "short short stories", or "flash fiction."



Actually, this chart is pretty much the standard as far as word count goes.

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Ah, okay - this is what I suspected. It's for the convenience of the moderators, not for the benefit of the readers or authors. Thanks for acknowledging that. ;)


To be honest, as a reader, I pass on just about anything longer than 5000 words. I ain't got time for that shit.

I seriously recommend you consider either writing shorter stories or splitting up the long ones, i.e. over 9000.
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I'm concerned because I want as many people as possible to read what I write (I know, I'm weird like that). There's no chance they'll enjoy it if they don't read it! I don't want a potential reader to give my story a skip because it has an artificially low rating (or because it's visibility is compromised). My point being that readers are less likely to enjoy my work and stay to the end if it's artificially broken up in spots that serve an arbitrary word limit rather than the flow of the story.



My longest story consists of 9,931 words. Before I tore into it, it was well over 12,000. Even with its edits, I was still accused of over-indulgence in my scene creation and character development.

In general, it is my shorter stories that generate the votes and re-reads. Perhaps I'm just better at writing shorter stories. Or maybe I'm crap at longer ones. Either way, I chose to publish on Lush, and agree to fit into the guidelines, rules, policies and preferences of the site, regardless of how I prefer to write my stories.

One of the things I've learned here is having control over my words (only in stories, not in forums), and the power less or more words can have. There are other places to publish one's stories that have no boundaries, or more "acceptable" boundaries, but Lush's standards are a great way to gain control over one's writing skills. If it doesn't fit the guideline format, have you the skill to make it so? Harsh editing can be a great thing.

However, if you're so great a writer that you mustn't deign to compromise and find natural breaks in your stories (as is your right), then you ought to properly publish and sell the whole thing for your readers to wank over all at once. If you're a great writer, then pubLushed story readers will click the link for when it gets to the sex. They'll be absolutely gagging for that next installment with all the promise of juices and squelching, and you won't need to worry.
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As a reader, I've switched off to multi part stories. I found myself skimming over one series months back after it promised so much and provided so little. There's teasing and there's teasing. Chapter 10, 15, 32 or whatever has lost the plot in my humble opinion
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I write multi part stories. I currently have two on this site. For me chapter length has more to do with continuity. A chapter should be a concise telling of a segment of the story. Lush has a 10,000 word limit for each submission so there are times when I have to turn a single chapter into two or three chapters. When that happens I try to post them in rapid succession.

The chapter I'm currently working on for one of my stories is now over 16000 words. I haven't posted it, because I haven't yet completed telling that segment of the story. Eventually it will be posted as three chapters. When I finally post it everything will be complete and the chapters will be posted in quick succession.

The current chapter for my other story is complete. I am about to post it. While it is only about 3900 words, it is a complete segment of the story.
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My current offer stands at 90,000 so far, separated into 27 chapters of around 3,500 each and is still not complete. Reader figures are not high but I know that those who are still with me are genuinely enjoying the story and not just getting off of a piece of gratuitous porn. Ok, there is nothing wrong with that but is it what you want? and if so, why are you complaining, Dirty minded Mom?
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I don't know if this will help anyone, but my own guide for chapters has less to do with length, and more to do with where is a good place to break the story. For example my longest chapter story, "Conversations with Amy" has eight chapters, and they range from 5000 to over 9000 words each. What was important to me was to make each chapter a complete story rather than an obvious 'Continued in the next chapter". Oh, there are story threads that link the whole, but each one has to feel like a solid story and part of the overall. Using word count as a way to divide up a story just never works well for me.

Another example is my "Is Being Used a Bad Thing?". Only four chapters (so far) and each one is just under 2000 words. But each one is a distinct story, connected true, but each one has a unique aspect of it and each ending is a solid end point for that part of the story. I know I could have lumped them all together into one long story, but I liked the chapter idea for this one, it made them more individual to me. I didn't plan on less than 2K words per story, the end points simply were a natural spot to end a chapter. I don't know how long the next chapter will be, but I will still try and make is a unique take and an appropriate ending, even if it's less than 2000 or more than 9000 :-)

I guess I should really mention that Conversations with Amy is actually part of a larger story, which also consists of Conversations with Jessie, Conversations with Donna, Conversations with Katherine, and Conversations with Greg. I've been working on and off with a Conversations with Gem. The stories all share a common set of characters and there is some overlap between Amy and Donna's stories. Writing chapter stories is pretty challenging, there is so much happening and so many characters. but totalling out over 100,000 words might make it a bit long, but it was a fun set of stories to write up. (Yes, the last part is a shameless plug, so sue me!) LOL!

Good luck to all who attempt chapter stories,
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Being restricted to 10,000 words per submission here, I re-submitted my first publishing here as Intro - Chapter 2 which basically takes the reader through the background before the main character starts interacting with other women, some of whom become future wives of his, which happens in later chapters that will be part of additional submissions due to word length and content.

Check out the hit series!

Introduction - Chapter 03 - Published | Chapter 10 – Published

Chapter 03 - Chapter 04 – Published .. | Chapter 11 – Submitted/Awaiting approval

Chapter 05 – Published .............................. | Chapter 12 – Waiting for submission

Chapter 06 – Published .............................. | Chapter 13 - Waiting for submission

Chapter 07 – Published .............................. | Chapter 14 - Being Written

Chapter 08 – Published .............................. | Chapter 23 - Written

Chapter 09 – Published

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Also, I have started using the following template to create clearly delineated plots to each chapter in my novel. If I'm unable to realistically fill all the sections with something meaningful, it might mean that I have too many chapters.

Characters:

Location:

Setting:

Crucible:

Goal:

Stakes:

Motivation:

Music:

Resistance:

Tension:

Suspense:

Climax:

Resolution:.

Check out the hit series!

Introduction - Chapter 03 - Published | Chapter 10 – Published

Chapter 03 - Chapter 04 – Published .. | Chapter 11 – Submitted/Awaiting approval

Chapter 05 – Published .............................. | Chapter 12 – Waiting for submission

Chapter 06 – Published .............................. | Chapter 13 - Waiting for submission

Chapter 07 – Published .............................. | Chapter 14 - Being Written

Chapter 08 – Published .............................. | Chapter 23 - Written

Chapter 09 – Published