im going to strip on cam but please i would like more nicer comments, i am abit blonde for this, i didnt do well at school
plus i most work alot so i dont write
so please i will do a better story so u brainy smart ass fucks like your self can read oh... did i offend u? hope i didnt haha
ok, here is the and i will keep it
if i get up to 50 comments and rates, i will strip on cam and its a promise and for free
i need 40 to go
i will show all 50 people that commet and if they missed it, i will show u again to the ones that miss my show
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40 comments to go, until i strip live on cam
Matriarch
Quote by sophine69
im going to strip on cam but please i would like more nicer comments, i am abit blonde for this, i didnt do well at school
plus i most work alot so i dont write
so please i will do a better story so u brainy smart ass fucks like your self can read oh... did i offend u? hope i didnt haha
ok, here is the and i will keep it
if i get up to 50 comments and rates, i will strip on cam and its a promise and for free
i need 40 to go
i will show all 50 people that commet and if they missed it, i will show u again to the ones that miss my show
You're not going to win any friends anywhere on the web talking like this.
Quote by sophine69
and the date will be when i get more comments and i need up to 40 more comments or rates mostly comments
but the thing is, i am getting nasty comments by you nasty brainy pricks, but i know you dont want to see a free strip show then well dont bother
by the end of 3 weeks i dont get these comments i will not strip unless i get a beg and a please hehe
so comment and i will do my promise
Was there really any need to start another thread? and be equally as rude in that one?
If you only read one (more?) book in your life, make sure it's this one:
one you guys are not my real friends and im just trying to write and plus im not being rude, its trust most of you alot on here are so brainy that you slag of people work like they are stuipd
sorry if it did but your being rude your self really and the show, i do that for fun not to make friends haha
so please dont be retard
sorry if it did but your being rude your self really and the show, i do that for fun not to make friends haha
so please dont be retard
Matriarch
Quote by sophine69
so please dont be retard
ok, im trying to be nice
as for you lot, i dont under stand how ur being cunts when i just said nice stuff about ur work and i mean it
but as for u guys as some one just tryed to make a story and mostly busy all the time
it shows what people that talk shit to some one cus they are pricks for being up there own ass really
as for you lot, i dont under stand how ur being cunts when i just said nice stuff about ur work and i mean it
but as for u guys as some one just tryed to make a story and mostly busy all the time
it shows what people that talk shit to some one cus they are pricks for being up there own ass really
well im sorry but i just try to write a story, i dont write as much and im sorry its crap for u to not read but i tryed, i will get better but it takes time
sorry if i sound rude, i would like to get along with u guys and another thing, im not desperte, i just like to have fun on cam some time
sorry if i sound rude, i would like to get along with u guys and another thing, im not desperte, i just like to have fun on cam some time
thank u and i respect what u are saying and i do respect other people work but when some one gives u shit for a story
it pisses u off, if they hate it then dont comment it but what i do on the cam is my time, i do it for fun cus i know i look good and got a good body to show off but i call people like that cus of school and people i know around me say im blond and most be dumb shit
it pisses u off, if they hate it then dont comment it but what i do on the cam is my time, i do it for fun cus i know i look good and got a good body to show off but i call people like that cus of school and people i know around me say im blond and most be dumb shit
Mr Nobody
Well !!you are keeping me amused if nothing else...
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Quote by sophine69
thank u and i respect what u are saying and i do respect other people work but when some one gives u shit for a story
it pisses u off, if they hate it then dont comment it but what i do on the cam is my time, i do it for fun cus i know i look good and got a good body to show off but i call people like that cus of school and people i know around me say im blond and most be dumb shit
It looked to me like the majority of the comments you received were constructive criticism. If you really want to improve as a writer, you need to be able to handle criticism and not be so defensive. Take a look at what people have actually said and see if you can find ways to improve. Another tip; read a lot. You'll learn much more about writing if you're doing plenty of reading.
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is it like this
Mr Nobody
Being the kind person I am .. I will try and edit it next week
to make it readable for the young lady
to make it readable for the young lady
Matriarch
You're a good sort DB.
Active Ink Slinger
i don't know that was not allowed to send it here，，，sorry。。。i have deleted it amoment ago，，thank you for your regards。。
Active Ink Slinger
didn't know the rules on this website，，and i have changed the imagine and others ，have a good enjoy with your stories，，，thank you。。
Matriarch
That's better makeloveit. The rules specific to image posting are here: http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst7_Image-Posting.aspx
By the way, I thought China had banned access to all web sites of an erotic nature? How can you access our site?
By the way, I thought China had banned access to all web sites of an erotic nature? How can you access our site?
Active Ink Slinger
i searched it by online，that was an accident opptunity to meet it ，，i wanted to find a website there are so many foreigners that i could conversate with them to improve my speaking english first，then i met yours。。
Active Ink Slinger
i sent about 3 pics like that ，，，if you found it please delete it ，，，thank you 。。。