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Sure. Try Fate Into Doubt Won't Go which is nearly there.
I think I get it. You're making the narration sound as though the character was giving it. As though its in his voice even though its not dialog.
Exactly. Sometimes I can do it easily, sometimes it's a struggle, other times it doesn't work at all. It's a gradual learning curve for me.
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"That's not writing, that's typing " Truman Capote (about Mr. Kerouac)
#Too much interior monologue makes me tired. Not a deal-breaker, exactly, but there had better be a reason to tell me all this.
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