Hello, just posted this in the wrong section but here we go again, I was just wondering what you all thought of the first two parts, any recommendations for improving my writing style etc? thank Graham
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Hi hun just thought I'd tell you I loved them both. Written so cruelly I love the humiliation tactics of the mistress, I wouldn't mind being her plaything either!