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I'm interested in recommendations for well-written stories that actually include a decent plot and character development, and that focus on the relationship, the seduction, and/or the build up of sexual tension than in just writing a steamy sex scene. No "Two strangers met in a bar, and then he randomly whipped his cock out, and she had to have him right there and then" or "I was secretly hot for my teacher so I flashed him my tits out of the blue one day, and then we fucked like porn stars." Let me know what your favourites are.

Don't believe everything that you read.

If you are interested in reading one or more of mine, here are a few, with the first one current.


https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/confessions-the-camping-with-friends-1.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/TtC4oLaY8ksXEJaZ

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/confessions-the-port-macquarie-story.aspx


Below, might be my favorite of Milik The Red's. There is a follow-up story to this, if you are
interested. You can find it on his story page.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/seduction/the-taking-of-cassidy-lynn.aspx


I hope this is what you are looking for! G
Not mine! smile

Kibeho by Wilful. He's is a master craftman, and this is one of my favorite stories here.
Lost Angels by BrownKoffee (hi Hannah!). Moving and honest, fully realized characters. She has some serious game.
The Riley Boy series by Ravenstar. Not only is she is a great writer, but her stories are hawt! Hottest here, IMO. Be forewarned, it gets kinda rough.
Baby Blue by Mad Martigan is like dropping acid, a drug-fueled, hyper-kinetic roller coaster ride. Not traditional story-telling, so maybe not what you're looking for.

There are more, but I should be working.

I'm too lazy to provide links. But these are my most recent faves. Look em up.

EDIT: Okay, I will add one of mine, since it's buried in the back of my stories page and will probably never be read again: Endless Playground. It's more a short story with a sex scene than erotica.
Read the Kristina series by oceanrunner. I'm in agreement with verbal about Hannah's work, pick any and get lost in it. ? Have a read of chesh78 too while you're there. He can write!

Endless playground was my random pick of all verbals stories x you won't be dissapointed enjoy xx
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Read the Kristina series by oceanrunner. I'm in agreement with verbal about Hannah's work, pick any and get lost in it. ? Have a read of chesh78 too while you're there. He can write!

Endless playground was my random pick of all verbals stories x you won't be dissapointed enjoy xx


Thank you dear. I went back and looked and you commented TWICE!

Oceanrunner does indeed have a way with a story.
Dancing Doll's West Coast Games series is probably the litmus test for stories that contain more than just sex. it's a bit dark, but it's a must read for anyone interested in getting lost in more than just a sex scene.

here's the first chapter: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/west-coast-games-part-one-the-beach.aspx

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

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I don't mind putting forward my Education of Diana series for a good story with realistic erotica. It is definitely not for someone looking to get off.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/the-education-of-diana-ch-01.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/the-education-of-diana-ch-02-1.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/the-education-of-diana-ch-03.aspx
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Sorry to disagree, Green_Man...... it was a great story line for a solo rainy day at home.... all afternoon to be naked, free to enjoy....
Most of my stories contain a plot. I like developing the characters and scene behind the sex. Some of my stories go a full chapter before anyone takes their clothes off! You should check them out - I have a very wide variety of categories I write in.
I think my stories may be what you are looking for. My stories are based on real events that actually happened in my life. I have Parts 1 and 2 posted titled, "My First Gang Bang and Golden Shower." I write them as I remember them happening, as this even happened almost 42 years ago, a few months after my 17th birthday.

I try to write them so the reader can picture what is happening. I begin the year before we started dating. He would not date me until I turned 17 and was legal. I started dating the man that became my first Dom / Master on my 17th birthday. Oddly enough, as one of your examples mentions, he was my math and science teacher in high school.

The end of part two is still on the first day of a 3 day party that quickly, for me at least, became a 3 day gang bang. I was the only one that attended the party that did not know it would be a gang bang. When I left for the party I knew I would be having sex with Teach, but had no idea it would be in front of everyone at the party. Or that he would offer me to others, both men and women.

A bigger surprise to me would be that I loved ever minute of it, and I was not forced into doing anything I was not comfortable with. That weekend I had a lot of first in my sexual education. On the day before if someone would have ask me, "Would you like to be shared with other men in front of my boyfriend?" I would have told them, "There is no way I would consider doing anything like that!"

The reality was, that the next day, the extremely erotic excitement, turn ons, and sensations created when my seduction into several new parts of what is know as the lifestyle, became instantly addictive. The orgasmic bliss I experenced was nothing like any I had ever experienced before. Those excitements, turn ons, and sensations still occurs on a daily bases today.

I hope to post other parts to the story as soon as time allows and I can get the LS rules figured out. Part 3 is written, but not up to LS standards which change from one mod to the next.

Brandie
I try to make an intricate plot and develop character in all my stories, no matter how short, but maybe not to your satisfaction. However, I don't want to go on for so long that the reader gets antsy for some action. I mean, I assume that's why they're reading here. I think A Square Peg has a thought out plot. I think An Aegean Vacation tells a story. And I could go on, BUT, all of my stories are gay, and that might not be what you're looking for. If not, too bad.
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Read the Kristina series by oceanrunner. I'm in agreement with verbal about Hannah's work, pick any and get lost in it. ? Have a read of chesh78 too while you're there. He can write!

Endless playground was my random pick of all verbals stories x you won't be dissapointed enjoy xx


Thanks for the shoutout, Em!

A couple of links, to chapter 1 of the kristina series, and also to the last one. I wrote the last couple of installments especially to stand on their own, so I also think you can read the last one first, decide if you are interested in how they get where they got, and start back at chapter 1. (or do it, you know, the "normal" way and start at ch 1).
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/novels/a-polaroid-of-kristina-part-1.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/milf/the-end-of-kristina.aspx

Some other ones of mine w some plotting:
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/the-best-laid-plans.aspx (w Browncoffee)
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/dirty-martini.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/runaway.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/mature/last-tango-with-malena.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/goldmedal-whore.aspx


As for other writers, anything by Ravenstar is fantastic, especially the above mentioned Riley Boy series, which, as V mentions, can be kind of dark.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/the-riley-boy.aspx

Burquette has some amazing stories. Probably my favorite writer on the site:
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/seduction/trading-favors.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/quid-pro-quo.aspx

Browncoffee's East Coast West Coast series is about as hot as things get, and just about everything she writes has a plot:
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/east-coast-west-coast-part-1.aspx

VirgoGo doesn't write anything without a plot:
Plane Whore may be a good place to start: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/plane-whore.aspx

hope this helps!
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Goody! More to add to my reading queue! And while I'm here, I don't ever really promote my own stories in the forum, but I think this one deserves a nod. Hope you agree!

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/exhibitionism/stalkings-and-lace.aspx



Yes IT does... It's one of my favorites ...Lol

Master_Jonathan's The Master of O is a kick ass series you might like.
Ping has some great stories too


I have lots of stories on my favorites list ... I just write poetry myself so I don't have any of my own stories to promote!
I concur with the above: browncoffee, RavenStar, Burquette, oceanrunner, VirgoGo, Liz, Jen, and Wilful to name but a few, all have fabulous plot-first stories in their collections. MadMartigan has a unique, plot-driven, trippy style too, and though it's not always to everyone's tastes, it's pretty visceral.

Me? Well I try. I'm not in the above league, but if you fancy wading through the prose, you might find something you like among my characters. For a list, check out the Joining the Badgers thread, which gives a little precis of each to whet your appetite.

Please browse my digital bookshelf. In this collection, you can find 120 full stories, 10 micro-stories, and 3 poems with the following features:


* 30 Editor's Picks, 77 Recommended Reads.
* 16 competition podium places, 11 other times in the top ten.
* 23 collaborations.
* A whole heap of often filthy, tense, hot sex.

I'm not sure if this is what you're looking for, but who can resist a shameless plug?

I wrote a couple of stories about a husband and wife looking to spice up their marriage, with the trials and tribulations that can bring.

Vanilla Spice is the wife's attempt at something new (also has audio): https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/vanilla-spice-1.aspx

Vanilla Sand is the husband's attempt at something new: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/oral-sex/vanilla-sand.aspx



If you fancy a longer read where you get into the head of an introverted fisherlass who discovers where mermaids come from, you could try A Mermaid's Tale: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/supernatural/a-mermaids-tale.aspx



And finally, if you wish to go on a sweet journey, you could also follow the adventures of a gingerbread man with low self-esteem who wants to be a sexier cookie (added bonus, you find out where candy canes come from, and this one also has audio): https://www.lushstories.com/stories/humor/ginger-spice.aspx

I won't be offended if you don't go there.
Ut incepit fidelis, sic permanet.

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I'm interested in recommendations for well-written stories that actually include a decent plot and character development, and that focus on the relationship, the seduction, and/or the build up of sexual tension than in just writing a steamy sex scene.


I mainly write short, single scene stories that skip the long build up but are still about relationships and getting into the character's head. Verbal's excellent Shard stories are the same. They all revolve around relationships - complex ones - that drive the story.

Here's my latest and an excellent one from Verbal.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/cafe-in-the-rain.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/shard-2612-what-do-you-see.aspx
You are invited to try my Devil's Harem series. Also my story, Batgirl, which came in second place in the Sporty Sex Story competition. It's a baseball setting.
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I'm interested in recommendations for well-written stories that actually include a decent plot and character development, and that focus on the relationship, the seduction, and/or the build up of sexual tension than in just writing a steamy sex scene.


Most of my work has plot/character -- and Love Never Dies is definitely in that story category. But it's long: 10 Chapters.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/love-never-dies-chapter-1.aspx


Away from banging my own drum, Stormdog is excellent (again some novel-length series) while Saucymh writes some amazing shorter tales with great detail. Check them out, you won't be disappointed.
I think you have enough material for an extended reading period. I don't advertise at all but, I do have a few stories that you might consider for your list.

Thanks,

O2
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Yes IT does... It's one of my favorites ...Lol

Master_Jonathan's The Master of O is a kick ass series you might like.
Ping has some great stories too


I have lots of stories on my favorites list ... I just write poetry myself so I don't have any of my own stories to promote!


Thank you DD for the promotion... I'm glad you liked the Master of O series... It was a lot of fun to write as well! smile
Thanks everyone for the suggestions. Lots to read. I'm a fan of many of the authors listed here. My personal tastes are fairly vanilla, so I don't usually go for a lot of the darker or kinkier stuff, but I do admire the talent in writing a well crafted plot and characters.

[Shameless Self Promotion] BTW, all of my stories are plot-based as well if you want to check them out. [/Shameless Self Promotion]

Don't believe everything that you read.

This is generally what I shoot for. There's a couple in my oeuvre that could be considered "Stroke stories" but generally I try to set some kind of plot and character context for things. IOW, feel free to read my stuff. It pretty much all fits what you're after, I think.