New author looking for criticism and requests!

23 Aug 2012

I recently started writing for Lush and managed to post three of my short stories.

My first one is Happy Anniversary, you can find it on my profile page...

I use the same two characters in the other two, which can be found on my profile. I am looking for criticism, someone to point out the areas i need to improve on and maybe areas I spend a little too much time doing.

I always am looking for requests to write someones fantasy, I find it helps develop your skills as a writer. Simply send me a message and we can work out details.

Hope you enjoy reading and I hope to release more short stories in the coming months.

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/happy-anniversary-1.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/house-party.aspx

(links added by admin)

~Shirudo

Edit : Thanks to Shylass for pointing out my mistake, the link was blocked by my rookie status and I adjusted the message accordingly.

23 Aug 2012

You need twenty posts before you can add links and images. But people can click on your name to find your stories. Welcome to Lush! sunny

Ut incepit fidelis, sic permanet.

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