In a revenge story, how far and brutal should be enough...
cheating - how far to take it...
Bullying - how far to take it...
revenge for - how far to take it..
don't know if i explained myself correctly...
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just how brutal revenge should be enough?
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In my opinion revenge should be slightly greater than the wrong done to you.
Word Wizard
brilliant response...
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On a certain other site I know that revenge stories resulting in the perpetrators being burnt are pretty popular.
And while I enjoy them, sometimes it's fun to drop a 50 megatonne warhead on top of a pair of cheaters, Lush tends to be more of a measured site.
I have had characters break noses, knees and kicks to the balls, but the scenes have never been over the top unrealistic.
Whatever you do must be within the rules here. So any reaction to cheating and bullying has to comply. Graphic violence, tends to be during sex, so no beating them bloody with a frozen cum filled condom while they are rutting. That said, much more detail than I've just put might be classed as too much even if they are not joined at the hips.
Add to that list suicide and death, so no Saddletramp (if you know who I'm talking about you know. If you don't, PM me) style burning.
Now with regard to , best to avoid any mention or implication of this altogether. The use of the word alone can be enough to get story rejected.
Hope this helps, at least until someone more knowledgeable wades in.
And while I enjoy them, sometimes it's fun to drop a 50 megatonne warhead on top of a pair of cheaters, Lush tends to be more of a measured site.
I have had characters break noses, knees and kicks to the balls, but the scenes have never been over the top unrealistic.
Whatever you do must be within the rules here. So any reaction to cheating and bullying has to comply. Graphic violence, tends to be during sex, so no beating them bloody with a frozen cum filled condom while they are rutting. That said, much more detail than I've just put might be classed as too much even if they are not joined at the hips.
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Add to that list suicide and death, so no Saddletramp (if you know who I'm talking about you know. If you don't, PM me) style burning.
Now with regard to , best to avoid any mention or implication of this altogether. The use of the word alone can be enough to get story rejected.
Hope this helps, at least until someone more knowledgeable wades in.
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i agree, the is enough to get a story bounced, but the in question would not happen in the story, it would the events that take place after...
another great response, thanks.
another great response, thanks.
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i agree, the is enough to get a story bounced, but the in question would not happen in the story, it would the events that take place after...
another great response, thanks.
it would still get the story bounced. we don't condone . that's a hard no.
You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
Wouldn't you rather have a nice cup of tea?
Wes Craven's first film, Last House on the Left, is a -revenge story. Even though it was released in 1972, by today's standards it's still pretty brutal.
Don't believe everything that you read.
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"If a man commit a crime against you, he must be paid back a thousand times!"
