Kind and patient editor/help required.

as the topic name suggests, looking for non judgmental editor help on some new stories, fresh eyes.

thanks in advance.

Fiona - I'd be glad to help edit your stories. You can take a look at some of my stories and see the way I craft them. I've been writing for years. Let me know! Even if you don't need me - happy writing!

Hello i have written a story of about 500 words that has been rejectef a few times the STORY TITLE. IS. MY HOTWIFE THE CHANGES SHE WANTS TO MAKE PART TWO I write under construction65 ant help would gladly be appreciated THANK.YOU and have a great day ..Bob

Construction65, I would be glad to help you. If I might ask, what reason was given for returning your stories? I have helped edit a couple of April601's stories. I do some subject specific technical writing and have being doing my own editing. If the stories are being rejected for pushing the guidelines too hard I'll try to suggest ways of backing off enough to be acceptable. The stories that appear here is more than porn stroke material. The storyline here are amazing and are works of art that contain erotica. Why don't you pm me and we can arrange to chat.

Hi, I’m looking for an editor to go over a story. I have submitted it twice. It comes back with, punctuation, making it flow, speech marks in the right place, layout and identifying who is talking. I have put a lot of time of time into this. Though I go through the process of changing it. The story never seems up to standard. I have read other people's stories to try and get an idea of what is required. But I must be missing something. This is my first attempt a writing.

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Hi, I’m looking for an editor to go over a story. I have submitted it twice. It comes back with, punctuation, making it flow, speech marks in the right place, layout and identifying who is talking. I have put a lot of time of time into this. Though I go through the process of changing it. The story never seems up to standard. I have read other people's stories to try and get an idea of what is required. But I must be missing something. This is my first attempt a writing.

I'd love to take a look and hopefully help my love

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No one submitting stories are English Lit majors, or published authors (book form).

Not at all true -- and it's No one is, not No one are. Or where you trying to prove your point?

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I've seen some stories rejected for some pretty picky things by the editors

Moderators. We only edit small things or do quick fixes, all the rest, you have to do yourselves.

And "rejection" is not actually a thing (unless your story is full of grossly illegal, icky non-con stuff, or it's just an advertisement).

We return stories to you, so you can work on them and fix the (sometimes small but numerous or repeat, but either way obvious and distracting) issues we, the moderators who are also your readers, find when we read your stuff.

but perfection is not realistic,

which is why nobody expects it from you.

It is not unreasonable, though, to expect you to work on your story, is it?

P.S.: Given that you have never actually submitted a story, what exactly are you referring to when you say you've "seen stories rejected", I wonder?

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P.S.: Given that you have never actually submitted a story, what exactly are you referring to when you say you've "seen stories rejected", I wonder?

A one day old, non-paying member. Surprise, surprise. I wonder who they used to be...

That's quite the funniest thing I've read all day.

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Thank you for the abuse. This is exactly why I left here years ago!

What abuse?

As stated Fiona, I'd help you proofread or edit, non-judgmental too of course. Just let me know if I can help you in any way.

Okay, no more, can we stay on topic please? Any more issues please take it private.

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You must not have read much all day. I've read much more comical in just a short time being on here today.
And, the harassing comments only continue. I thought this was a safe place, free of harassment, and demeaning comments?! I guess "old dogs never die", and some things never change. Under Acceptable Use Policy naming and shaming members is not permitted under the Non Acceptable Behavior policy.

For someone who left because of "harassment" you sure came back wanting to mock users and mods.

So, take what you give or might as well delete, again, to remake.

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For someone who left because of "harassment" you sure came back wanting to mock users and mods.

So, take what you give or might as well delete, again, to remake.

Ma'am, I just asked everyone to stay on topic. That's enough, please.

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I'd love to take a look and hopefully help my love

Hi,

Thank you for your offer. I apologise for the delay in replying. I got a bit disappointed and fed up with the story being returned.

However. I thought what the hell and revamped the story. I am just a bloke. No degree. Just a secondary school education. I did spend 24 years in the Army, and went through their education system. But as my company clerk once told me. I write how I talk.

Would be grateful if you could read my story. Please send details of how to send it to you.

Many thanks

G xx.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/one-drunk-night-of-fun-with-erin-2

Looking for some help so i can get this posted